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Started March 07, 2021 by @tomat brightness_7

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If you're up for it, could you please do Ezekiel? Ezekiel Arísen

oohhh, I love the name Ezekiel. it's so posh and proud, but not in a bad way. I'm curious about his personality, let's go.

Overview - 95/100
Arísen reminds me of rice
such interesting information right on the first section! you're doing it well!

Looks - 90/100
BIG THANK YOU FOR KILOGRAMS
I love the descriptions, they're so detailed!
oh they're perfect
there's so little written about his scars in comparison to his other marks. how did he get them? how does he feel about them?
he's so cool oh my

Nature - 90/100
ah, it's good it's good
and his talents! perfect descriptions!
hmm I wonder what does his mask look like
I'm in love with how everything is neatly written

Social - 99/100
Arcane Squad Member sounds so cool
now I want to be a member too
"Vermilion" that's exceptionally specific

History - 80/100
that's sad
such horrible parents
THIS IS NOT OKAY
even though I hate his parents, I love the impact they've created. Ezekiel has a well-written backstory, I wouldn't change a thing. the only thing that could be added is something that would interest the readers to read his further story. a 'trailer', a hook or something. foreshadow his next steps.

Magic - 100/100
woah that's really creative
yeah this section is perfect

Quotes - 98/100
💜

Ezekiel is such a well-developed character, I'm out of words! the amount of information in majority of his page's sections is just right! you sure know him well, he has nothing to hide from you. he's an ideal character, and I'd surely read about him more. keep up the good work!
average - 93/100

Ezekiel is:
67% likely to be my friend
55% likely to by my lover
89% likely to be my party member
74% likely to be my enemy

could you look at Sarus? Sarus

Ezekiel is such a well-developed character, I'm out of words! the amount of information in majority of his page's sections is just right! you sure know him well, he has nothing to hide from you. he's an ideal character, and I'd surely read about him more. keep up the good work!

Thank you so much! He's a character that I hold dear to my heart and I'll be working on him a lot within my book. It's always great to hear an outside viewpoint, thanks again ❤️

Could you do my other main character Myles? Myles or >]•/.

well hello there Myles. I wonder how chaotic you'll be in comparison to Discord

Overview - 90/100
"The Fool". interesting
"Mirror Guardian"? even more interesting
I'm interestingly interested. good job.

Looks - 93/100
his hair is "bushy and wild" but how long is it? I think it's one of the most important information about hair appearance
a mirror? that's really unique!
wow I didn't anticipate him to look like that. I'm in love with his design. I want to see him.

Nature - 89/100
why does "naïve" have an umlaut?
I wouldn't call "isolated and abandoned" flaws
hmm, every field has enough information, but could be elaborated. for example, why does he have these fears? how did he get corrupted (unless it's a spoiler)? what made him believe in these morals?

Social - 90/100
I want to know how this bracelet looks like
"Giraffe" that's quite random
ooh the Mirror Dagger is so cool and unique

History - 50/100
oh, there's so little information here. who are Stelara and the Black Hole Guardian? why can't he get out of the Mirror Realm? there's so many questions. I'd like to read more about his past, and what might happen to him in the future.

Myles is a simple character with a beautiful and unique design, in my opinion. there's still so much to uncover, so many traits to develop and a whole story to define. I hope you'll work on him more to make him an even better character!
average - 84/100

Myles is:
63% likely to be my friend
42% likely to by my lover
56% likely to be my party member
84% likely to be my enemy

why does "naïve" have an umlaut?

I’m not the owner of the character, but I do know that “naïve” is an alternate spelling; both it and “naive” are technically correct. :)

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

could you look at Sarus? Sarus

Sarus. I assume it's an aquatic creature. I wonder how wrong I'll be

Overview - 87/100
yeah I was wrong
struggles to read names

Looks - 90/100
woah those names surely are confusing
let's put the names aside, overall his descriptions are easy to read. nothing to comment, going further!

Nature - 100/100
wow what an elaborated description
wow another elaborated description I'm impressed
okay I can safely say that this section is perfectly written, I really have no negative remarks

Social - 99/100
okay I love the gods of this religion, who cares that I only know their names
the "Reputation" field is so creative, I would never think of adding it!
this section is also perfectly written! in some places the names are quite confusing, but I'm sure that you know what lies behind them

History - 99/10
chef's kiss

Family - 95/100
oh I hope he will

I'm just… out of words that can express my love and respect for Sarus. he's such a well written character, and doesn't need any more improvement! I'm really proud of you, and you should be, too! I'd surely read his story to know more about his life and characters I've encountered during my reading. you did a great job. bows deeply
average - 95/100

Sarus is:
80% likely to be my friend
72% likely to by my lover
63% likely to be my party member
23% likely to be my enemy

why does "naïve" have an umlaut?

I’m not the owner of the character, but I do know that “naïve” is an alternate spelling; both it and “naive” are technically correct. :)

thanks for the explanation!

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

sorry, I've already closed this. but maybe in the future, when I'll be bored again, I'll check out and rate him ^-^

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

sorry, I've already closed this. but maybe in the future, when I'll be bored again, I'll check out and rate him ^-^

Aw man, but thank you! I'm glad to hear that eventually it will get checked! sorry if I waisted your time

I'm just… out of words that can express my love and respect for Sarus. he's such a well written character, and doesn't need any more improvement! I'm really proud of you, and you should be, too! I'd surely read his story to know more about his life and characters I've encountered during my reading. you did a great job. bows deeply
average - 95/100

Sarus is:
80% likely to be my friend
72% likely to by my lover
63% likely to be my party member
23% likely to be my enemy

Thank you!! Character development is one of my favorite things so I'm always happy to hear when someone likes my character :) Sorry if you got confused with all the different names, there are a ton of characters and world building elements in the book and I have a habit of giving them weird fantasy names

I'm back!
…

uh, I'll have to reread some of my ratings to remind myself how I was doing that ;-;

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

okay, I'm back to George! that was quite a long break, I hope you didn't die of curiosity or something

Overview - 89/100
George is… quite an ordinary name. don't worry, that's not bad. I think I just expected a more fantasy-ish name

Looks - 86/100
170 of what? I need a unit
ooh, a Dragotaur. I want to know more about this race and what it is exactly.
I'd read more about his appearance. maybe you could write more details about his face and body type

Nature - 78/100
I'd give him more mannerisms. what does he do when he's sad or afraid? what about his body language?
what a beautiful motivation!
ah, that's not a flaw. this would suit better as his mannerism. to define a character's flaws, determine his virtues first. if he's courageous, make him reckless, for example. I'm sure that with some thought you'll devise a well-balanced personality for him.

Social - 86/100
woah that's an interesting religion
should a girlfriend be a possession?

History - 64/100
that's a really tough punishment. how old was he when he flew below the clouds? if he was very young, shouldn't he be punished more lightly? how did his parents react? what did he do after being banned? there's still a lot of questions that should be answered.

I believe George is a wonderful character, I just think that some fields in his page lack good descriptions of his personality or history. don't hesitate to write everything you know! if there's some information that shouldn't be public, just say it. it will make me say 'ah. the sacred spoilers.' rather than 'why this character has such a poorly written background?' consider my words!
average - 81/100

George is:
72% likely to be my friend
54% likely to by my lover
78% likely to be my party member
58% likely to be my enemy

:D thanks for the rating, now I know what I need to work on to make him even better!

Silver (Invalid Character), I don't know if I've been here before but it was probably before I updated her.

Delilah Higashikata go nuts-

HECK YEAH THIS IS UP AGAIN

let’s roll >:)

Silver (Invalid Character), I don't know if I've been here before but it was probably before I updated her.

hmm… I don't think I remember Silver. but maybe that's because I was rating all these people so much time ago. anyway, let's rate her!

Overview - 95/100
that IS a unique name! although it may be hard to remember
I don't quite get what's her role from this quote
is there a story behind her nicknames?
wow, it's my first time seeing character archetypes on someone's page, that's neat! I like that!

Appearance - 90/100
what a poetic description of the color of her hair
wait wait wait, "Asími"? is this her other name? why did it pop out of nowhere?
her eyes are so interesting
a demigod! even more interesting
scent of old paper and books. is it even possible to learn this power?
I love the descriptions! her voice and clothing are so well written. I don't need to give you any tips here

Nature - 99/100
perfect mannerisms
I NEED TO READ HER BACKSTORY
and to think that she's only 13
I am willing to give my love I've suppressed it for so long
I really have nothing more to say. this section has no major flaws. you could write more about her hobbies, but that's just a suggestion, not a necessity. you've covered all the things that should be here. good job!

Social - 89/100
and who's Mr Winston?
now I need to try these apples

History - 87/100
year 9718? humanity is doing fine I see
so that's her story. now I'm sad
does she have any further memories? this field looks like it isn't fully finished
now that I know her character arc I need to read the whole story

Silver is surely an interesting character. I'd love to read more about her. her nature is described so closely that I feel like I've known her since primary school, although her history needs some more work, but that's a good start! and now I'm out of compliments. just keep up the good work, and write your other characters as well as you wrote her!
average - 92/100

Silver is:
93% likely to be my friend
61% likely to by my lover
73% likely to be my party member
69% likely to be my enemy

YES this is open again! I didn't have the chance before to give you my boi Knox, but can you do him now?

_{Also, I'm @TheOpenerOfWays and @WepwawetWrites changed it twice bc I'm now obsessed with yet another ancient egyptian god…}

Oooh! Here's my baby, please rate her: K.T. (Katy Lynx)

Delilah Higashikata go nuts-

I will.

Overview - 90/100
Delilah is such a beautiful name it's like an ocean wave crashing into the shore ant then going back into the deep dark abyss of the water world like "De" (prepares to slap the beach) "Li" (slaps) "Lah" (retreats)

Looks - 91/100
where are the kgs and cms
p r e t t y
one day, in the far future, when the humanity will be no more, I will watch JoJo, every episode, and then and only then, I Will Understand Everything

Nature - 78/100
I'd like to see more mannerisms
no prejudices? I'm impressed
Stand User… Stand User… what…
I'd like to see more hobbies, too!
there's still so many things to write about her personality! what are her likes or dislikes? her goals or fears? this section is the most important, so don't be afraid to write everything you know!

Social - 84/100
california rolls

Family - 100/100
everything is good here!

History - 72/100
I DESIRE MORE EVENTS I WANT TO KNOW MORE

Stand info - 86/100
okay now I'll finally know what a Stand is
I've read this and I'm still not quite sure what a Stand is

I'll skip "Music" because I'm not familiar with any of these songs

I have nothing more to say! Delilah is a simple character, and seems finished, if you don't want to make her a super-complex-unique-perfect-hero-of-a-5000-page-book. but if you want to make her more likeable, write more about her personality and history!
average - 86/100

Delilah is:
64% likely to be my friend
38% likely to by my lover
70% likely to be my party member
63% likely to be my enemy

Delilah is:
64% likely to be my friend
38% likely to by my lover
70% likely to be my party member
63% likely to be my enemy

when the character is only 1% more likely to be your friend than your enemy

Here’s Baney boi to rate

HECK YEAH THIS IS UP AGAIN

let’s roll >:)

nice to see you again, Tide! I'm curious what you've prepared for me this time ^-^

Overview - 90/100
Havits sounds so real. it's like a real surname. I also love the sound of "Monyi". what's interesting is that I read the first syllable with a French accent and the second with Chinese
I think I should skim through Clikor's page to have at least some basic knowledge about what I'm going into skims
OKAY I LOVE THE CREATIVITY OF CLIKOR
and now I'm interested in Volcanum, too
okay back to Monyi
what's a D-year? I didn't quite catch it in the Clikor's page

Looks - 98/100
everything is so detailed I love it
I need to see him

Nature - 100/100
…I really have nothing to say! everything is so detailed and well-written and clear and understandable, you have nothing to add!

History - 92/100
struggling to use Scratch on mobile so in the first link I can only play the song, but the second works just fine (I think)!
I'd be happy to read about him more!

Social - 98/100

CHEESE

I will defend him for him
I want to hear this language

wow, Monyi is such a well-developed character! even though he doesn't have a finished backstory I believe that you have it in your mind! I love all the details put into his appearance, and I'm impressed with the Clikor as well! I hope that I'll see your universe more in the future!
average - 96/100

Monyi is:
89% likely to be my friend
50% likely to by my lover
77% likely to be my party member
46% likely to be my enemy

You can do Allison if you'd like. Allison Katrielle Atwood