forum If you're character were to die, what would he/she say before they passed?

Started January 22, 2018 by @Astrid

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Wait, whos were you talking about?

Allania: So this is the end? Sad. I would've liked more time with you.
Ethan: I'm coming home…
Max: I hid 10 million dollars in the-
Mariana: I may as well tell you… I'm actually *****

So, my character has a 90% chance of dying when she faces off against the guy who controls the hive mind and all that BS. In her last hour, she would take them down with her. If it was Creed, the scenario would be totally diffrent.

Avalyn: Hey, Creed, don' worry ´bout it. You´ll see me again.
Creed crying: I wish I could´ve stayed with you.
Avalyn: Listen, when you get…home…I want you to turn my desk inside out. Tear it apart. I left something in there for you in the event I died. Listen to me, you stay safe. If I find you in hell a year from now I´m kicking your ghost-ass.

Aspen: remember to like, comment, and subscribe…
Pine: oof
Samuel 1: I'm becoming MCR
Patagonia: lol byeee
Kayleb: what's the wifi password in heaven?
Joel: I'm gay
Alexis: tell Brendon Urie I love him
Solomon: I'm on the hiiiiighway to heck k
Naomi: jeez finally
Haleigh: oh my lawrd i get to see all the doggos!!
Rory: I am shook-eth
Aaron: oh come on i haven't even lived yettt
Jasmine: No you hang u-
Kat: where's my phone?
Samuel 2: I'm sorry. love. I had to do this….
(aughhh the last one)

Most of my characters are too darn dramatic, y'know?

Meril: i'm too pretty to die!
Sammal: (several minutes of swearing)
Menny: Can you please do that somewhere else? I have places to be.
Evariste: You know, I thought I'd be hung for treason before this.
Roul: Oh, good job, nice arc there. Very nice swing. Let's hope it sticks this time, huh? (the joys of being an almost unkillable necromancer)

Fenin would probably just utter a single curse word

Ember: "T-Take care of Bryan for me, please."
Cause of death: Sycore embodied in Tom. (Yeah, it sounds weird.)

James: "I'm sorry. This has to be done, goodbye."
Cause of death: Suicide to save the world

Hunter: "I'm sorry Ember, I wasn't strong enough."
Cause of death: None

Audra: "This is payback for my crimes. I deserve this."
Cause of death:None

Tom: "I stopped- I stopped Sycore."
Cause of death: None

Megan: "The creator had this planned from the beginning. Don't worry, Sycore and the power of the amulets will not spread out of this world!"
Cause of death: None

Bryan: "Tell Ember she's the best sister ever."
Cause of death:None

Hicia: "This curse will not spread to you, even at the cost of my own life. I didn't matter anyway, I'm cursed too."
Cause of death: Suicide to save the world from the curse.

Birane: "wAIt THis WOrkS?"
Cause of death: Gently killed by Hicia.

Sycore: "YOU FOOLS! DO YOU NOT WANT TO FREE? YOU TRAITORS!"
Cause of death: Violently killed by Hicia.

Diami: "I am not good at socializing with humans." (Same Diami, same.)
Cause of death: Emo James

Scolding hot pain coursed through her veins with an excruciating slowness causing her body to convulse . she curled around the knife that was protruding from her abdomen as her life bleed out around her. She didn't remember how it had got there, what she did know was that she didn't have much longer, the world was starting to slip away and the dark abyss started to come closer. Suddenly strong warm arms lifted her, the sudden movement tore a agony ridden scream straight from her soul. shh, shh, it'll be ok she heard from a familiar male voice as he hugged her close to his chest. she felt as though she had been saved from her own personal hell as she opened her eyes and looked up into her lovers face. her pain faded into the distance, all that mattered was that he was there. troy? she asked as she looked into his tear streaked face. yes? he replied his voice to cracking. I love you more than anything, she sobbed I wouldn't want to die with anyone else but you. he hugged her tighter as a sobs racked his body, you wont die he comforted. they both knew that wasn't true. she laid her head on his chest for the last time and listened to his sobs as the darkness started to enclose her. in her last moment of light a memory arose, troy thrusting the knife into her. the night claimed her soul as her body remained in her murders arms.

tell me what you think^^^, its my first time doing this

It's really good! Really interesting twist. My only problems are maybe you be more consistent with your capitulation and use quotation marks for dialog.
Maybe i'm just a grammar nazi.

Love it!!

Depends on which character it would be and what situation they're in, but some of the ones I thought of are "Here we go again" and "Oops…"

It just depends on how they die, but here's one of mine if they died.

Destiny: I guess this was what was written in my destiny.

Dante: I guess it's too late…to make up for everything I've done

Honestly what I'm planning for his last words to be

So far I just have two of the characters who would definitely die
Ryllachor: Goddammit run!
(He never swears, so that's rare, he sacrificed himself so the other people can go)
Hyenros: I'm sorry brother…Please take care of him…
(By him he meant his young son)

Robin: Well, I guess it's about time, isn't it, Gray? I've been in the hospital so much it was bound to happen sooner or later.
Grayson: Take care of Robin (probably to Timothy)
Timothy: I never really got to tell you, but… I love you (probably to Grayson)
Dr. Al: Pretty ironic that I died, huh? Being a doctor and I you'd have thought I could save myself.
Maddox: I wonder what death is like? Perhaps it would be nice… peaceful. I know I've sort of wanted this for a while now, but now that it's happening… I'm not sure if I made the right decision.

Lucas: Finally… I'll get to see him and mom again…
Zach: Don't cry for me, you look like a wimp. But in all honesty, I love you guys.
Aren: His last words…
Lloyd: Run, Nate! Run while you still can!
Nathaniel: I can't believe his sacrifice was in vain…
Caire: Bury me in the forest, please… I want my body to help nature if nothing else.

Is it getting dark in here…..

Depends

M: Gets shot in the head cant say anything
Zackary: Broken neck and is lonely, slowly dying on forest floor So here I am, alone, back where I started all of those years ago…
Cameron: Dying of sickness Please, stay, I wish to say more…
Neo: Stabbed in the stomach I know I'll be back, I can't die…

Kaleb: fucking finally… (immortal)
Charmaine: nothing, her soul is shredded to pieces by the space-time sword that is bound to it when Kaleb [above] rips it out of her, though I suppose she'd give him a look of utter disbelief and betrayal before being erased from time

Wes: Son of a b**!

Yamatsukami: Ah, shit. Not how I thought today was gonna go…
Aqua: Yama, buddy! Take care… for me…
Gawain: No… I never got to say goodbye… to Guinevere
Guinevere: Gawain, take care of… our son for me.

Yama is the son of Gawain and Guinevere, and Aqua is his best friend (for context).

Not gonna spoil their names, but these are their death quotes.

"Maybe… in another life… we'll be together longer… But at least… I never got to spend a single day without you alive… Please… take care of our precious child…" (childbirth)

"Take care of your brother for me, Julia…" (burning)

"My… baby…" (drowning)

"Your mother's waiting for me, Ishtar…" (freezing)

"WHY DID YOU NEVER LOVE ME, YOU SON OF A BITCH!" (suicide)

James: I wish I could've stayed a little longer, to see what the world would be, what it would become. But when a life ends another begins… I actually don't wanna die. Funny, isn't it…

Spidey: Mr. Stark, I don't feel so good—-

PurplePygmyPies
YOU EVIL HUMAN DON'T TORTURE US LIKE THIS!!!!
Curl up in a corner and cry

My favorite:

Mr. T: "I– I… I pity… the- fool…

or

Egg: [Incoherant screeching as the universe rushes by to implode due to the fact that Egg is the heartbeat of all]

Sherlock's near-death encounter was by far, heart wrenching.

Or John's reaction, idk

DO NOT TORTURE US LIKE THIS AGAIN. EVER!

Now, I don't normally get emotional during movies/shows… but Goodbye Christopher Robin got me