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do you guys think these are things you'd read?

novelle 1:
continually grumpy 15 year old, Amaya, amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) for short, has hyperacusis. a sensory disorder that causes her hearing to be extremely sensitive. she's never taken seriously as someone with a disability and is disregarded and bullied daily.
thomas is a fun loving immigrant from england, and considers amaya a dear friend, although he can't say he approves of her creepy friend jim. things start to change when weird things begin to happen around jim and amaya, and thomas doesn't seem too pleased about it.

This one probably because of personal bias (I have a sensory thing with hearing as well, which causes problems socially for me, so I would love someone to relate to)
also so much mystery! I like it

@IcarusFightsTheSun book

do you guys think these are things you'd read?

novelle 1:
continually grumpy 15 year old, Amaya, amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) for short, has hyperacusis. a sensory disorder that causes her hearing to be extremely sensitive. she's never taken seriously as someone with a disability and is disregarded and bullied daily.
thomas is a fun loving immigrant from england, and considers amaya a dear friend, although he can't say he approves of her creepy friend jim. things start to change when weird things begin to happen around jim and amaya, and thomas doesn't seem too pleased about it.

This one probably because of personal bias (I have a sensory thing with hearing as well, which causes problems socially for me, so I would love someone to relate to)
also so much mystery! I like it

that one is actually horror, but i can't describe it well without giving away details

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that one is actually horror, but i can't describe it well without giving away details

By mystery I meant intrigue

@im-with-stoopid pets

Working on tweaking the fantasy animals I already have before I make up some new ones and some plants to go with them.

I've given in to temptation and I am making a snail dog

@IcarusFightsTheSun book

Working on tweaking the fantasy animals I already have before I make up some new ones and some plants to go with them.

I've given in to temptation and I am making a snail dog

OBVIOUSLY you should

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

Working on tweaking the fantasy animals I already have before I make up some new ones and some plants to go with them.

I've given in to temptation and I am making a snail dog

OBVIOUSLY you should

yes you should

@im-with-stoopid pets

Snail dog moment

I've only now had the realization that I really DO NOT know how to introduce an entire ecosystem's worth of fantasy plant and animals.

Anyways, the snail dog is coming along nicely. Pretty much, it's a turtle that can actually move fast. Hides in shell for protection. Mammals that usually run solo. Not wet and slimy because they'd probably freeze, but they do have shiny coats from grooming themselves. Farmbred variants have proportionately smaller shells, and they can't fully hide away. Farmbreeds tend to be bigger (besides their shells) and more aggressive than wild variants.

Totally herbivores, but they're used as herding animals because they're super territorial over the plants they like. Also, their shells make nice whetstones and surprisingly durable china.

@im-with-stoopid pets

Snail dog moment

Still not sure how to introduce like 12 new species without it being info overload, but yknow what that's an issue for future me
I'm gonna go make a rhino crab because yeah

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Snail dog moment

Still not sure how to introduce like 12 new species without it being info overload, but yknow what that's an issue for future me
I'm gonna go make a rhino crab because yeah

AMAZING ❤️
I like the patterns on the shoulder!

@Morals-are-for-mortals language

Snail dog moment

Still not sure how to introduce like 12 new species without it being info overload, but yknow what that's an issue for future me
I'm gonna go make a rhino crab because yeah

Looks very cute. 10/10. Would have one in your world.
Steals your art style

@Serenity88 group

I HAD A NEW STORY IDEA THIS MORNING

is its in my wings universe, so everybody has wings. the protagonist has two siblings; she is the middle.
her ability is that she doesnt dream, but can 'Dreamgaze' into others' dreams. she can only see into the dreams of:
}someone she is close to
}someone who she is looking for (that never happens though)
}or someone who is having a more kind of dream. yk, the ones that are more vivid, more memorable, more emotionally significant. those dreams basically leap into her mind, clamoring with intensity.

her siblings are the only ones who know. they learned to lucid dream, that way they can talk and fool around in their dreams together. she has a strong moral code, so she doesnt get close to anyone because she sees accidentally 'Dreamgazing' them as a biiiigggg violation of privacy.

what do you guys think? this is all I have rn, but does it sound cool? pending name is "Dreamscapes".