@saor_illust school
that
scares me, ngl
but uh, take that as a good thing
that's really really hecking good
but like
the intense emotion in there
that
that scares me
that
scares me, ngl
but uh, take that as a good thing
that's really really hecking good
but like
the intense emotion in there
that
that scares me
that
scares me, nglbut uh, take that as a good thing
that's really really hecking goodbut like
the intense emotion in there
that
that scares me
saying i wrote it with intense emotion made me happy i feel like thats the best complement you can give me atm, i heard somewhere that poetry is supposet to make you feel somethig and i try to be as descriptive as possible about what im feeling. thanke :) <3
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yw <3
you alright, tho?
pms are open if you need anything :3
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yw <3you alright, tho?
pms are open if you need anything :3
Well im fine right now, writing is my outlet and i feel alot better after i write something like what you saw, but ill keep that in mind, and also same to you, im known as a good listener and i try to give the best advice i can and im very nonjudgemetal, pm me wenever (:
ahh okayy
ill keep that in mind too <3
OH
MY
GOD.
THAT LAST ONE—
WHAT?! IT’S SO GOOD— MY GOD.
I love it so much ;-;
thanks man!! i really appreciate it!
you never fail to impress but holy crap, those last two
oh wow thanks man!
It’s one of those
Coffee-scented sweatpants days,
When time slips past as if a haze
Of fog and sand and broken glass
Holds onto seconds as they try to pass.
When teachers always have more to say
And a whole week fits inside a day.
It’s a gray-cloud white-sun kind of sky,
Where even the birds don’t want to fly,
And green-brown tree branches have to hold
It up, and even the sun looks a bit cold.
One of those
AABB poem days
When I try a hundred different ways
To write down vague and flighty feelings,
And in the end not feeling anything.
You know, those days.
What role do I play in this story
am I a mentor a passer by a villain
the Anti hero the love interest, the one who breaks you apart
Who am I in your story,
am I here to stay or to go
will I tempt you down an improper road or bring you to the light
How long will I be in your story
a sentence a paragraph a page
will I make an appearance in the squeal am I here to stay
When will I know my role in your story
is it tomorrow today or a few years
will I know in a few moments or will it be on publication day
Where am I in your story
the beginning middle or end
am I the in the exposition or a surprise in the Climax
Who am I in your story
the best friend the enemy the child
who am I to you I wonder am I in your story at all?
(Small existential crises Free Verse)
oh relsey i love it. the repetition. the themes. just brilliant bb
Thanks, I'm not doing great so It was a nice outlet.
I was held gently
I was told I was special
That’s why I’m not living
On the rocks anymore.
I trusted the hands that
Kept me afloat
I rode them over hundreds of heads
Rode them to the top
And they were kind
They were encouraging
Until they found out they’d made a mistake.
Without thinking twice, they tossed me away
There was no warmth from them anymore
Just empty air
Until cold, hard stone welcomed me back
To the land of the normal.
I lay there alone,
All broken up on the marble,
Staring at the hope I can’t reach
And thinking
It's easy to walk when you’ve never flown
But impossible after you’ve fallen.
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got some news i didn't enjoy. writing is a nice outlet. feeling a little better, but not much.
;-; much emotion
i'm sorry to hear that tho ;-;
i hope u feel lots better soon <3
I am the writhing hands from the pit of your stomach,
You know the ice cold grip of their fingers.
I am the unspoken language that teenagers are fluent in
The language of insecurity
Words that are shouted silently to ears that don’t listen
And out loud to skies that can’t reply.
I live in those words.
I use them to crawl from my hiding place and grab onto you
To freeze you in place and give you
One more reason to feel like an outcast.
I am the part that doesn’t listen to logic.
The part that overrules well-meaning words
Because I’m so much closer.
I know you better than they do.
Listen to me.
You heard the teachers.
You heard what your friends meant to say.
I translated their sentences for you
And they all said
You are nothing.
When everything falls apart
And the thing with the feathers flies off
To find someone sane,
I’ll stay.
You know who I am.
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I’m kinda in a block and if anyone has a title for me that’d be nice.
~familliar strangers~
We were both dreamers
we had lost our way
we found comfort in each other
told each other thoughts
from the darkest corners of our minds
we were happy, well as happy as we could be
in that moment, things were perfect
but that was long ago
i feel like the fairy-tale is over now
i didn't trust you
i trusted the person you acted as
the hidden you wwere selfish and cruel
you hid it well until i did not give you what you wanted
little bits showed here and there
but i didn't pick up on it then
i wish i had
you exposed your true colors to me
the day you left without saying a word
i shattered that day, feeling betrayed
the heartbreaking truth was
you never cared,
even though i cared so much about you
i used to want to impress you
to try to help you whenever i could
you used that against me
i guess we are nothing but familiar strangers now
and i prefer it that way
DO NOT ENTER.
[Warning : Mentions of Suicide]
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(holy fuck altrince, i had to look twice at that first few lines to realise that this wasnt some vent or a thing you actually saw-)
(this was-)
(literally there are no words to explain what this is)
(it's like-)
(a lot more emotional this time, i guess? a lot of stuff really spoke to me tho, idk it just hit really hard)
(I… wow. I've had thoughts of suicide and have attempted to take my own life before… but that… it put it into perspective for me. I don't know…)
I want to write something but I've been having writer's block for like a solid week now-
I want to write something but I've been having writer's block for like a solid week now-
me too…
I want to write something but I've been having writer's block for like a solid week now-
me too…
jvhdshbjhsvbr what do we do
I want to write something but I've been having writer's block for like a solid week now-
me too…
jvhdshbjhsvbr what do we do
Chill? Write to break the writer's block? Idk, whatever ya wanna do
I need inspiration
and motivation
I need inspiration
and motivation
You have a voice. It needs to be heard. If you don't write, how else is it gonna be heard?
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