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Started January 18, 2019 by @Shuri-the-Floof-Doggo

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Cool! That's awesome!

its complicated but basically my original world as a parrallel sister realm and one of my characters ends up meeting a person from said sister realm and helping them and getting help from them and the random character from that realm keeps popping up in my half planned arc….

Sup!

HI!!

I know how it is. In my multiverse characters pop in and out of dimensions all the time. It's absolutely batshit keeping track of who's where and when, and why they're there. It's all composed of Layers. Which are, well, layers. Layers of space and time.
I've also got lots of Abstract Gods.

Sup!

So what's your story about?

meh, The most confusing part is keeping track of who is related to who and how, who is royalty and who is not and who is related to royalty and how, and then who has what powers, why, and who can do what with said powers….

Oh good grief my universe is honestly just so confusing.
I'm surprised I'm actually going through with it.

You wanna talk confusing?? I can give you confusing that is so confusing even I can barely keep it straight and I'm the one who made it confusing!!

I have a universe inside of a universe inside of a universe which originated from inside a mind.
Trust me when I say I deal with confusing.

I have a multiverse where eavh universe has it's own astral plane, and there's one Heaven, one Hell, one Purgatory, one Limbo all for the whole multiverse, and multiple dimensions where gods dwell. The Heavens and Hells and such all operate on different frequencies, so when someone from one universe dies, they go to Heaven or Hell. But they don't see a copy of themself.

It all starts from a singular mind that has been fractured into five different distinct "personality pieces", each containing their own personal universe based on which piece it is. There are Champion, Mecha, Spirit, Syndicate, and Memory. Within each of these five fractures are 9 separate alternate realities, however, there only 5 inside of Memory's universe, which contains a hodge-podge mix-up of the other universes all into one place.
There is a 6th, unknown "personality piece" called Archive. Not much information is given on this besides the fact that this is where all the failed and broken universes go. Archive is nicknamed "Memory's shadow", for obvious reasons.

Each character and "genre" is unique only to their specific universe "piece". However, there are different variations of them based on which alternative they are from.

There is only one single being who knows the entirety of what is going on, as they are a representation of a "God", all-knowing and all-seeing. The reader is somewhat like a "Jesus", following around this "God" as the reader is guided and shown bits and pieces of everything contained within the "fractures" through several different book series, which will end with a single novel at the end with a first-person view of this "God"-like being. It will include this "God's" time and thoughts about the reader throughout the journey, along with hidden bits of detail about who's fractured mind created all of this.

meh, The most confusing part is keeping track of who is related to who and how, who is royalty and who is not and who is related to royalty and how, and then who has what powers, why, and who can do what with said powers….

Definitely! Creating characters with unique powers and portraying life with said powers is so natural to me, and fun!

Oh yeah I almost forgot that one of my characters now has a mate I didn't know about, and will have a child,
Speaking of which one of my mains ended up being a dad without my knowing and his son/mate are both from another world…
(My characters have minds of their own….)

meh, The most confusing part is keeping track of who is related to who and how, who is royalty and who is not and who is related to royalty and how, and then who has what powers, why, and who can do what with said powers….

Definitely! Creating characters with unique powers and portraying life with said powers is so natural to me, and fun!

Its not so much the rare powers, its more the history and "Laws" behind it that get confusing…
(How many guardians are there again???)

I see! Now that's awesome, Lee! Truly complex and amazing!

meh, The most confusing part is keeping track of who is related to who and how, who is royalty and who is not and who is related to royalty and how, and then who has what powers, why, and who can do what with said powers….

Definitely! Creating characters with unique powers and portraying life with said powers is so natural to me, and fun!

Its not so much the rare powers, its more the history and "Laws" behind it that get confusing…
(How many guardians are there again???)

Oh. I see. Cool!

yes.. my freind keeps telling me to simplify and i cant…
(also i just remembered that i have a character from another completely different world who happens to be a part of an interdemensional secret agency…..and technically she was only there for background and history purposes….)

Sup!

So what's your story about?

It's hard to explain, but the main character gets herself involved with a gang after seeing a fight and hearing information she shouldn't have heard. Her crush is a leader in the gang and she agrees to be her bodyguard in exchange for her life. Being involved in this gang will forever change her life.

I see! Now that's awesome, Lee! Truly complex and amazing!

Thanks. It's been rattling around in my head for a while now.

I see! Now that's awesome, Lee! Truly complex and amazing!

Thanks. It's been rattling around in my head for a while now.

I can tell. You've done a lot with it!

Sup!

So what's your story about?

It's hard to explain, but the main character gets herself involved with a gang after seeing a fight and hearing information she shouldn't have heard. Her crush is a leader in the gang and she agrees to be her bodyguard in exchange for her life. Being involved in this gang will forever change her life.

Ah. I'm guessing lots of intrigue!

Sup!

So what's your story about?

It's hard to explain, but the main character gets herself involved with a gang after seeing a fight and hearing information she shouldn't have heard. Her crush is a leader in the gang and she agrees to be her bodyguard in exchange for her life. Being involved in this gang will forever change her life.

Ah. I'm guessing lots of intrigue!

Yep! It's got action, romance, and some ghost and fantasy elements. The gang actually is involved with the ghost of death and the main character has the same burn mark as him/it… She learns a lot about her past and future as well as her crush/girlfriend's.

Sup!

So what's your story about?

It's hard to explain, but the main character gets herself involved with a gang after seeing a fight and hearing information she shouldn't have heard. Her crush is a leader in the gang and she agrees to be her bodyguard in exchange for her life. Being involved in this gang will forever change her life.

Ah. I'm guessing lots of intrigue!

Yep! It's got action, romance, and some ghost and fantasy elements. The gang actually is involved with the ghost of death and the main character has the same burn mark as him/it… She learns a lot about her past and future as well as her crush/girlfriend's.

Wow! That's actually really original.

Wow! Spirits are always fun to work with!

They really are fun to work with.
Of course so are demons!

Sup!

So what's your story about?

It's hard to explain, but the main character gets herself involved with a gang after seeing a fight and hearing information she shouldn't have heard. Her crush is a leader in the gang and she agrees to be her bodyguard in exchange for her life. Being involved in this gang will forever change her life.

Ah. I'm guessing lots of intrigue!

Yep! It's got action, romance, and some ghost and fantasy elements. The gang actually is involved with the ghost of death and the main character has the same burn mark as him/it… She learns a lot about her past and future as well as her crush/girlfriend's.

Wow! That's actually really original.

Thanks! An experience of mine gave me the idea.

Cool, honestly. I have had some pretty strange experiences, some of my writing is based on those.

They really are fun to work with.
Of course so are demons!

I don't do demons…. But I do have a variety of different spirit like beings…

They really are fun to work with.
Of course so are demons!

I don't do demons…. But I do have a variety of different spirit like beings…

Why don't you give me a few brief descriptions! I'd love to hear it.

One day, Kylee decided to write the Betrayal, to this day Kylee regrets ever writing it or thinking it was her “best work yet.”

Context?

They really are fun to work with.
Of course so are demons!

I don't do demons…. But I do have a variety of different spirit like beings…

Why don't you give me a few brief descriptions! I'd love to hear it.

well for starters I have the Spirits of Harmonix and Chaosae, basically guardian spirits of two very powerful types of magic. magic that is so powerful only one person in an entire generation can use it. also the two users of the said magics are known to be deadly enemies throughout history (except under very rare circumstances). Now what is really fun about that last fact is that it sets up my story cuz the current guardians are twins.

But what is very fun about the two spirits is their history!

They really are fun to work with.
Of course so are demons!

I don't do demons…. But I do have a variety of different spirit like beings…

Why don't you give me a few brief descriptions! I'd love to hear it.

well for starters I have the Spirits of Harmonix and Chaosae, basically guardian spirits of two very powerful types of magic. magic that is so powerful only one person in an entire generation can use it. also the two users of the said magics are known to be deadly enemies throughout history (except under very rare circumstances). Now what is really fun about that last fact is that it sets up my story cuz the current guardians are twins.

But what is very fun about the two spirits is their history!

That's cool! I like that!