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yeah.. having those two spirits around is a lot of fun later on… I mean they are just there, existing, for like the first book… but I plan on the second one having his role revealed with the truth about the Chaosae twin's treachery…
yeah.. having those two spirits around is a lot of fun later on… I mean they are just there, existing, for like the first book… but I plan on the second one having his role revealed with the truth about the Chaosae twin's treachery…
Context?
The Bertrayal is something I wrote last year about an OC I have, it’s about how she looses her memory. She regains it’s quickly, the villain and said villains motives were given away early on, and I gave up on it after Emi told me how toxic it is. Thank you Emi.
yeah.. having those two spirits around is a lot of fun later on… I mean they are just there, existing, for like the first book… but I plan on the second one having his role revealed with the truth about the Chaosae twin's treachery…
That's a cool ass concept!
I have two creators called Factors who run the whole multiverse. They're both nigh-omnipotent and/or just totally omnipotent. Neither is 'good' or 'evil', but they both represent opposite things.
yeah.. having those two spirits around is a lot of fun later on… I mean they are just there, existing, for like the first book… but I plan on the second one having his role revealed with the truth about the Chaosae twin's treachery…
That's a cool ass concept!
yeah.. Except that the Harmonix twin's son completely wrecks everything….
Cool! Worldbuilding is so fun!
yes it is, especially when your second main character turns into a creature that didn't previously exist and creates a whole new section of the worlds history….
yes it is, especially when your second main character turns into a creature that didn't previously exist and creates a whole new section of the worlds history….
Ooooooh! I have something just like that!
yes it is, especially when your second main character turns into a creature that didn't previously exist and creates a whole new section of the worlds history….
That sound very interesting, I couldn’t write that.
It came out of nowhere… quite literally out of nowhere… like most things do…
These are all good ideas!
Indeed!
Me: I just need to know the average size of a cave spider, I'll be back to writing again in no time.
Me, two hours later, suddenly scrolling through a five-page article on the different types of caves and their effect on ecosystems: I still don't know the average size of a cave spider…
YUP!! So true!!
That's the internet.
internet is awesome minus the fact that it can't give you a straight answer..
Indeed.
So does anyone want to critique one of my versions of Hell?
I will!
It's really long and complex. Kinda morbid too!
I am also bored…
Hi y'all my stories are not written yet, my character backstories depressing (I started crying the other day thinking about Huxley's but I also was in a very emotional mood so there's that too), and very GayTM.
That's perfect Jynnie!
I guess….if I could ever write anything that isn't shitty I guess I'd find out if it's perfect or not…..
You can write well! I believe in you!
Thanks Shuri. I just wish that I believed in myself.
Anyone can write well with a little practice!!!
You got any chunks from your book for me to analyze? Maybe we could critique each other!
Not yet I don't think, but if I do write stuff down I'll PM it to you to read, Shuri.
Perfect!
You're amazing, Jynnie-chan!
Boop!
Hey-oh! How's it going my dudes!
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