forum describe your characters and i'll have my characters vibe check them!

Started April 12, 2021 by @requiemisback language

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yeah you heard that right
i'm gonna have my characters vibe check yours!
so just send in your character desc and we can begin :)

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Name:
Gender/Pronouns:
Outlook on life:
Likes:
Dislikes:
Aesthetic:

Name: Monyi Havits

Species: Clikor

Gender/Pronouns: Male, he/him

Outlook on life: He tries his best to help out other people, but he doesn’t like himself. He tries his best to just get through life and maybe solve a few of the world’s science mysteries while he’s at it. Oh, yes, and also invent a lot of stuff.

Likes: Inventing, his family, his friends, his inventions, soft pillows, his blue backpack, the sky, reading, birds

Dislikes: Being shut down, failure, strangers, pressure, sharp objects, messing up, swimming, himself (ouch…), pollen

Aesthetic: A lonely old room, with several fabulous 7th grade science projects and chemistry experiments lying about. It has a slight air of being uncared for, and dust lines the desks and bookshelves, which are filled with thick chapter books and nonfiction. The place smells like coffee, old book glue, apples, and honey. There’s a rock collection along the wall, but most of the stones have fallen out or been brought elsewhere. Some old, classical music discs are lined up against a wooden window, where the sun’s rays are blocked by the dusty blinds. Only a few bars of sunlight shine through the blinds onto the floor.

Name: Monyi Havits

Species: Clikor

Gender/Pronouns: Male, he/him

Outlook on life: He tries his best to help out other people, but he doesn’t like himself. He tries his best to just get through life and maybe solve a few of the world’s science mysteries while he’s at it. Oh, yes, and also invent a lot of stuff.

Likes: Inventing, his family, his friends, his inventions, soft pillows, his blue backpack, the sky, reading, birds

Dislikes: Being shut down, failure, strangers, pressure, sharp objects, messing up, swimming, himself (ouch…), pollen

Aesthetic: A lonely old room, with several fabulous 7th grade science projects and chemistry experiments lying about. It has a slight air of being uncared for, and dust lines the desks and bookshelves, which are filled with thick chapter books and nonfiction. The place smells like coffee, old book glue, apples, and honey. There’s a rock collection along the wall, but most of the stones have fallen out or been brought elsewhere. Some old, classical music discs are lined up against a wooden window, where the sun’s rays are blocked by the dusty blinds. Only a few bars of sunlight shine through the blinds onto the floor.

ooh, Monyi is super cool! here's what everyone thinks :)

Embry: Hmm… Nostalgic vibes, definitely. The self-hate is definitely a mood… I think we'd get along great.

Mayou: Yeah, I agree with Embry on the vibe (surprising, seeing as xey're not as agreeable as xey seem-). We should listen to some music sometime! I know a few oldies that you should check out. :)

Chrins: Oof, pollen sucks. I have really bad allergies, and when pollen starts spreading… yipes. Inventing is fun! I've made a few gadgets myself… But yeah, Embry is definitely right, in terms of the vibe! Though I think it's also kind of like.. not so much nostalgia, but rather, a wish to go back to the past maybe? I could be wrong, but that's just what I got.

This looks cool.

Name: Punzis Marie Anchant
Gender/Pronouns: (She/Her)
Outlook on life:
Likes: Tomatoes, Adventure, Rock Music, Holiday Decorating, Ham, Playing Pranks, Riding Drink Carts and Being Right.
Dislikes: Teddy Bears, Eating Tomatoes, Fashion, Losing, Pop Music and Being Patient.
Aesthetic: A forest full of trees and life just after a rainstorm. The source of an unheard cry echoing just out of sight. A man standing alone in a room full of people. A shattered family photograph stained with blood. A final laugh before death, sighing alone in the night, scarred by battle. Scores of screams heard through a nightmare.

Name: Juniper Hirsch
Gender/Pronouns: male-ish, he/they
Outlook on life: The world's going to hell eventually. His friends are slowly trying to improve his outlook on life, especially Dick who is painfully optimistic, but he's pretty dead set on dreading the future.
Likes: cats, drawing and his sketchbook, new pencils, his friends, rain, wintertime
Dislikes: accidentally using his powers, bigots, extremely hot weather,
Aesthetic: drives to nowhere, beaches at night, oversized jackets that feel like hugs, sitting outside while it's raining, kisses that make you feel like you're drowning but in a good way, watching old horror movies, looking through old pictures, blurry polaroids, messy sketches that turn into scarily clean lineart

Name: Reese Blackwell

Gender/Pronouns: Non-binary, they/them

Outlook on life: Typically a bit pessimistic. They haven't exactly lived the happiest life with a family that doesn't support them, so they tend to project that on their outlook on the future. The more they open up to their teammates, however, the more they start to believe things will get better.

Likes: Tinkering, doodling, chocolate, upgrading their suit/prosthetic arm, autumn, action movies, small fish, etc. (They like their teammates too, but don't tell nobody)

Dislikes: Fridge magnets, silence, talking about their feelings, cheap tech, transphobia, etc.

Aesthetic: Disembodied robotic limbs suspended in clear water, shattered phone screens, a shiny car in the middle of a junkyard, listening to sad songs and crying at 3am when no one can hear you, tears on a computer monitor, blasting sensory-overloading music to drown out all other feelings, a lone goldfish glimmering in a murky pond.

This looks cool.

Name: Punzis Marie Anchant
Gender/Pronouns: (She/Her)
Outlook on life:
Likes: Tomatoes, Adventure, Rock Music, Holiday Decorating, Ham, Playing Pranks, Riding Drink Carts and Being Right.
Dislikes: Teddy Bears, Eating Tomatoes, Fashion, Losing, Pop Music and Being Patient.
Aesthetic: A forest full of trees and life just after a rainstorm. The source of an unheard cry echoing just out of sight. A man standing alone in a room full of people. A shattered family photograph stained with blood. A final laugh before death, sighing alone in the night, scarred by battle. Scores of screams heard through a nightmare.

Wow, Punzis is very neat :) Here's everyone's takes:

Embry: Rock music! Finally, another rock fan amongst my so-called "friends". The aesthetic… damn, those final list-offs hit home. We definitely share some aesthetic themes there. I get some hardcore martyr vibes from you.

Mayou: Holiday decorating… Ah, the memories that come from that. I get a similar vibe to Embry, but instead of "hardcore martyr," I get "weirdcore nostalgic" vibes.

Chrins: I'm with Mayou on this one. I dunno what else to add, since she made her point pretty well–

Name: Ramona
Gender/Pronouns: she/her
Outlook on life:
Likes: cooking, talking to Sophia (her friend/love interest ;) )
Dislikes: loud noises, not being able to be helpful in combat
Aesthetic: grunge/indie?
10/10 flustered and slightly sarcastic lesbian

Name: Ramona
Gender/Pronouns: she/her
Outlook on life:
Likes: cooking, talking to Sophia (her friend/love interest ;) )
Dislikes: loud noises, not being able to be helpful in combat
Aesthetic: grunge/indie?
10/10 flustered and slightly sarcastic lesbian

she also likes sitting with Sophia before school hours in the library either goofing off or reading books w/ her :)

Name: Juniper Hirsch
Gender/Pronouns: male-ish, he/they
Outlook on life: The world's going to hell eventually. His friends are slowly trying to improve his outlook on life, especially Dick who is painfully optimistic, but he's pretty dead set on dreading the future.
Likes: cats, drawing and his sketchbook, new pencils, his friends, rain, wintertime
Dislikes: accidentally using his powers, bigots, extremely hot weather,
Aesthetic: drives to nowhere, beaches at night, oversized jackets that feel like hugs, sitting outside while it's raining, kisses that make you feel like you're drowning but in a good way, watching old horror movies, looking through old pictures, blurry polaroids, messy sketches that turn into scarily clean lineart

I love Juniper's aesthetic ghjfhkf here's what everyone else thinks:

Embry: Rad. You got polaroids? I have a few old polaroids myself… Gotta find them in my mess of a tomb, haha. I get hot-headed vibes, but you also seem calm and collected. We should hang sometimes.

Mayou: Okay, what is it with Embry and being right about vibes? For real though, yeah, I get the same vibes Embry's getting. I also get some "hiding-my-powers-for-the-better-of-society" vibes from the first thing n the Dislikes portion.

Chrins: I basically just agree with Embry and Mayou ;-; You do seem fun though. I'd love to hang out with you and Embry if you two are willing!

Embry: Yeah… no.

Chrins: Aw man.

Name: Reese Blackwell

Gender/Pronouns: Non-binary, they/them

Outlook on life: Typically a bit pessimistic. They haven't exactly lived the happiest life with a family that doesn't support them, so they tend to project that on their outlook on the future. The more they open up to their teammates, however, the more they start to believe things will get better.

Likes: Tinkering, doodling, chocolate, upgrading their suit/prosthetic arm, autumn, action movies, small fish, etc. (They like their teammates too, but don't tell nobody)

Dislikes: Fridge magnets, silence, talking about their feelings, cheap tech, transphobia, etc.

Aesthetic: Disembodied robotic limbs suspended in clear water, shattered phone screens, a shiny car in the middle of a junkyard, listening to sad songs and crying at 3am when no one can hear you, tears on a computer monitor, blasting sensory-overloading music to drown out all other feelings, a lone goldfish glimmering in a murky pond.

That sad songs thing is so relatable I- ;; hhhgh
Here's everyone's takes on Reese:

Embry: AYO YOU'RE THIE FIRST ENBY I'VE MET AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT. platonically. totally. yeah. I get just… typical teeneager vibes from you? But you still seem pretty cool. I'd love to get to know you.

Mayou: I get lone-wolf vibes from you, Reese. Though that's not so much of a bad thing… Like Embry said, you still seem cool.

Chrins: I'm siding wth Mayou again.

Mayou: Thank you, Chrins.

Chrins: <:D

Name: Ramona
Gender/Pronouns: she/her
Outlook on life:
Likes: cooking, talking to Sophia (her friend/love interest ;) )
Dislikes: loud noises, not being able to be helpful in combat
Aesthetic: grunge/indie?
10/10 flustered and slightly sarcastic lesbian

Haha lesbians amirite
Here's everyone's thoughts:

Embry: FELLOW WOMAN LOVER. PLEASE BE MY FRIEND. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. ALSO FELLOW INDIE PEEP. GOOD VIBES HERE. MUCH GOOD VIBES.

Mayou: Embry, please calm down… You're letting loose a little.

Embry: clears throat Sorry.

Mayou: Anyhow, Ramona, I get punk-rock softie vibes from you.

Chrins: I got the same vibes too! Also I hate loud noises too :( Oof.

Name: Ramona
Gender/Pronouns: she/her
Outlook on life:
Likes: cooking, talking to Sophia (her friend/love interest ;) )
Dislikes: loud noises, not being able to be helpful in combat
Aesthetic: grunge/indie?
10/10 flustered and slightly sarcastic lesbian

Haha lesbians amirite
Here's everyone's thoughts:

Embry: FELLOW WOMAN LOVER. PLEASE BE MY FRIEND. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE. ALSO FELLOW INDIE PEEP> GOOD VIBES HERE.

Mayou: Embry, please calm down… You're letting loose a little.

Embry: clears throat Sorry.

Mayou: Anyhow, Ramona, I get punk-rock softie vibes from you.

Chrins: I got the same vibes too! Also I hate loud noises too :( Oof.

I didn't even realize the punk softie vibes on her but now I totally see it

Name: Vota Forst
Gender/Pronouns: he/him
Outlook on life: He hopes to have a relatively peaceful life (though he sadly doesn't) and wants to spend as much time as he can with his friends. Appreciates nature and wants others to as well. Kind of blunt/sarcastic
Likes: Painting, good wine (preferable red), turtles, sparring
Dislikes: The cold, dead things, strong wind, potatoes
Aesthetic: A flower tucked behind one ear, loose sketches in a worn journal, soft moss and old trees, the sharp scent of herbs, dewdrops, light rain, fresh fruit, a twilight sky with twinkling stars

Name: Vota Forst
Gender/Pronouns: he/him
Outlook on life: He hopes to have a relatively peaceful life (though he sadly doesn't) and wants to spend as much time as he can with his friends. Appreciates nature and wants others to as well. Kind of blunt/sarcastic
Likes: Painting, good wine (preferable red), turtles, sparring
Dislikes: The cold, dead things, strong wind, potatoes
Aesthetic: A flower tucked behind one ear, loose sketches in a worn journal, soft moss and old trees, the sharp scent of herbs, dewdrops, light rain, fresh fruit, a twilight sky with twinkling stars

God, Vota's aesthetic is so peaceful ;; I love him
Here are everyone else's thoughts!

Embry: I want a peaceful life too. I hate having to put up with these other nutcases, and not being able to get some alone time in. I get a calm, serene vibe from you.

Mayou and Chrins: How does Embry keep getting these vibes right?!

Mayou: No matter. I agree with Embry on the vibe.

Chrins: I do too!

Name: Wes Blaque
Gender/Pronouns: He/him
Outlook on life: Very bitter, pessimistic, and vulgar, he doesn't care what he does to get to the top, as long as he wasn't placed automatically at the top (which he was). Loves writing Vampire stories, or gothic horror in general.
Likes: Vampires, Curse words, Nature, Writing
Dislikes: Garlic, Religion, people, modern technology
Aesthetic: A burgundy coffin with gold trim buried in the middle of a clearing in the woods, inside are black and purple flowers and red satin. There are wolves howling in the distance. The trees around the clearing are slowly decaying, various woodland animals trod upon where the coffin is buried.

Name: Vota Forst
Gender/Pronouns: he/him
Outlook on life: He hopes to have a relatively peaceful life (though he sadly doesn't) and wants to spend as much time as he can with his friends. Appreciates nature and wants others to as well. Kind of blunt/sarcastic
Likes: Painting, good wine (preferable red), turtles, sparring
Dislikes: The cold, dead things, strong wind, potatoes
Aesthetic: A flower tucked behind one ear, loose sketches in a worn journal, soft moss and old trees, the sharp scent of herbs, dewdrops, light rain, fresh fruit, a twilight sky with twinkling stars

God, Vota's aesthetic is so peaceful ;; I love him
Here are everyone else's thoughts!

Embry: I want a peaceful life too. I hate having to put up with these other nutcases, and not being able to get some alone time in. I get a calm, serene vibe from you.

Mayou and Chrins: How does Embry keep getting these vibes right?!

Mayou: No matter. I agree with Embry on the vibe.

Chrins: I do too!

Yeah, he's peaceful, but most of his backstory is far from it ;-;
Thanks for loving him!

Here's my main protag, can't wait to see what you think!

Name: Zev Wolfgang

Gender/Pronouns: Him/His

Outlook on life: He sees any situation as a potential moneymakin' MACHINE! He's a little trickster and he loves getting into a good mystery. He lies and charms his way through life.

Likes: mystery novels, mythology, graffiti.

Dislikes: authority figures, "goody two-shoes", stagnation.

Aesthetic: dark and short shaggy fluffy hair, tan skin, earth toned baggy clothes (hoodies, sweatpants, ETC.), Stubble.

Name: Wes Blaque
Gender/Pronouns: He/him
Outlook on life: Very bitter, pessimistic, and vulgar, he doesn't care what he does to get to the top, as long as he wasn't placed automatically at the top (which he was). Loves writing Vampire stories, or gothic horror in general.
Likes: Vampires, Curse words, Nature, Writing
Dislikes: Garlic, Religion, people, modern technology
Aesthetic: A burgundy coffin with gold trim buried in the middle of a clearing in the woods, inside are black and purple flowers and red satin. There are wolves howling in the distance. The trees around the clearing are slowly decaying, various woodland animals trod upon where the coffin is buried.

This man is a whole mood and I love him for it
Here's everyone's input:

Embry: We have extremely similar aesthetics and outlooks. Holy crap. Anyways, I get very indie-alternative vibes from you.

Mayou: …

Mayou: AGAIN?

Chrins: Seems so

Mayou: Darn.

Mayou: Well, I agree with Embry on the vibes… again.

Chrins: We just need to stop talking and let Embry do this, don't we

Mayou: I guess so

Name: Candice Hart
Gender/Pronouns: She/Her
Outlook on Life: Basically the embodiment of YOLO. Jumped off of a building once because Kilian told her she might not have a chnace to do it again. Really good at being something she's not, Candice once infiltrated a government as a high school popular girl named Aurea.
Likes: Dolls, graveyards, her friends, Ashley<3
Dislikes: Pink, popular people, overly sweet things
Aesthetic: Pretty, poofy, ruffly pink princess things, but it's all black and torn up. Devil horn headband, bloody dolls strewn across the floor. The blinds are completely drawn, the room is only lit by green candlelight.

Here's my main protag, can't wait to see what you think!

Name: Zev Wolfgang

Gender/Pronouns: Him/His

Outlook on life: He sees any situation as a potential moneymakin' MACHINE! He's a little trickster and he loves getting into a good mystery. He lies and charms his way through life.

Likes: mystery novels, mythology, graffiti.

Dislikes: authority figures, "goody two-shoes", stagnation.

Aesthetic: dark and short shaggy fluffy hair, tan skin, earth toned baggy clothes (hoodies, sweatpants, ETC.), Stubble.

Ooo Zev seems really cool-
Here's what everyone else thinks:

Embry: Okay, so you're definitely a get-rich-quick kinda guy. I wouldn't say "con artist," but… the potential to be one is definitely there. You're into mythology too? Rad. We should talk about that sometime.

Mayou: I-

Mayou: Embry's spot-on again.

Chrins: Yep

Chrins: Also hELLO I LOVE YOUR LAST NAME PLEASE CAN WE TRADE

Mayou: Chrins

Mayou: You don't even have a last name to trade

Chrins: Oh, right

Chrins: Nevermind that then

Name: Knox Rivers
Gender/Pronouns: he/him
Outlook on life: He's an Astral Psychic, so he can't look at the sky. As a result, his outlook on life is sort of pessimist, because he actually CAN'T look up because when he does he gets seizures that really hurt. But when he does look up, even though the consequences will hurt, he's always rewarded with something that astounds him every time. He's a bit of a glass-of-acid-half-full guy. He's pessimist until he remembers to look up and see the bright side.
Likes: Food (sunny-side-up eggs), old paper, the cosmos, the smell of sap, mythology
Dislikes: Weasels (figurative and literal), losing someone, lectures, 60-watt-light bulbs that burn too bright
Aesthetic: Night-sky scattered with stars, some dusty books sitting on the wooden floor, skylight where you can see dust motes floating lazily. Sort of a cosmos/dusty books/scroll kind of aesthetic. He's a wee bit old-fashioned and insecure.

Name: Jordan Sanchez
Gender/Pronouns: Male, uses any pronouns
Outlook on life: He hates it. He doesn't think there's anything redeemable about it and claimed that "death would be a gift."
Likes: His friends, cats, the color green, reading
Dislikes: Most people, enclosed spaces, loud noises
Aesthetic: Rain in the city, dark hoodies, "Achilles Come Down", hardly talking, a quiet determination, making up your mind, a soft purple, sunset turning to twilight turning to midnight, looking up at the sky and seeing no stars, jasmine tea, a dark tabby cat

Name: Vincent Criss

Gender/Pronouns: Male, he/him

Outlook on life: There must be something thrilling out there in the world; something to keep his mind busy and his hands working. He can't sit still for too long, and he doesn't want to. Repetition is a curse to him, and he thinks that life has so much more to offer than he has been able to experience.

Likes: Hard work/working out, adventure, change, drinking, a good spar, meat-based dishes, knitting, occasionally a calm atmosphere

Dislikes: Tea, feeling like a situation isn't in his control, ignorance, emotional people, strong emotions in general, sitting around/doing nothing

Aesthetic: Forest green, sweating in the hot sun, sitting in the woods sharpening a sword, dirty hands, silence except for the sound of a horse walking through the woods, dark clouds and light drizzle, never inside- always outside, ferns but no flowers, rough skin

Name: Candice Hart
Gender/Pronouns: She/Her
Outlook on Life: Basically the embodiment of YOLO. Jumped off of a building once because Kilian told her she might not have a chnace to do it again. Really good at being something she's not, Candice once infiltrated a government as a high school popular girl named Aurea.
Likes: Dolls, graveyards, her friends, Ashley<3
Dislikes: Pink, popular people, overly sweet things
Aesthetic: Pretty, poofy, ruffly pink princess things, but it's all black and torn up. Devil horn headband, bloody dolls strewn across the floor. The blinds are completely drawn, the room is only lit by green candlelight.

Oooh, I like Candice's aesthetic!
Here's everyone's input:

Embry: Okay, so. Graveyards. Yes please. You give off goth fae vibes. Like, a creepy-cute kind of thing, y'know?

Mayou: You know what

Mayou: I'm just not even gonna try anymore

Chrins: Yeah same

Mayou: Embry, you take over from now on

Mayou: Chrins and I are leaving

Embry: Okay, fine by me