forum I Will Critique For You!

Started December 12, 2018 by Deleted user

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Hello Lovlies -

I enjoy critiquing characters, so that's why I'm here!

Disclaimer
None of what I say is meant to be offensive you or anyone in any way. It's just advice!
I do usually go pretty in depth with my explanations so bear with me, my responses my take some time, but that doesn't mean I will not respond. I'll try to get to everyone in order and be fair.

Thanks!

-Eris

Can you critique a character for me??

But of course!

Honestly just click on my username and pick one to do lol!

oh! uh. Okay. Any one of them?

Any of them.

Maybe Fern though? I don't think I've gotten her critiqued yet…

Fern! You got it

Thanks!

My two MC's, please?

Hi! Hope it's okay if I drop one of mine off: Leo Mun Thanks in advance, please don't be afraid to be harsh :-)

Richter Just keepin ya busy so I added a surprise second!
Jacqueline Ash It's like a buddy cop paranormal investigator thing.

Disclaimer they aren't finished but I wanted to get writing early on and see where I can evolve em down the line ya know.

Hello Lovlies -

I enjoy critiquing characters, so that's why I'm here!

Disclaimer
None of what I say is meant to be offensive you or anyone in any way. It's just advice!
I do usually go pretty in depth with my explanations so bear with me, my responses my take some time, but that doesn't mean I will not respond. I'll try to get to everyone in order and be fair.

Thanks!

-Eris

Hi! I’m hoping you might critique my only character, Seraphine. She doesn’t have a whole lot of stuff on her profile, so maybe some feedback on what to put? And maybe some suggestions on how to flesh her out more? Thank you, I hope I’m not being a pain!

Hey guys! I would love to do all your characters.
I had a death in the family over the weekend, so my responses are going to be a little delayed. I have NOT forgotten about you guys though. <3
I will get to everyone this week I promise.

Do my Protag (shared perspective with another character)

Or my antagonist?

Hey guys! I would love to do all your characters.
I had a death in the family over the weekend, so my responses are going to be a little delayed. I have NOT forgotten about you guys though. <3
I will get to everyone this week I promise.

That's really unfortunate! :( Please take care of yourself and your health, they are a priority.

Dude that's all good especially if it's something that serious. We all hope you're doing okay.

Aw, I'm sorry!
I hope you're doing ok!