forum The sun and the moon (one on on (Closed stalkers welcome)

Started November 02, 2018 by @basil_

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Echo looked at the world around her. Where is everyone? Where’s the castle? Wh- oh.. She stopped, suddenly realizing where she was. Her home planet glared down on the trees surrounding her, making her squint.

Moony closed his eyes against the bright sun. He’d always felt curious about the sun, but he hated it shining on him. It made him feel too warm, too bright. Despite the warmth in his body, his head stayed cold. He didn’t move.

Echo smiled briefly up towards the sun then pushed herself off the tree, walking and stumbling a bit. She had no idea where she was going, or who she was going to find.

Moony wanted to flip into the stream. His body was getting too hot. It was odd, he wasn’t aware the dirt-planet could get this warm. Perhaps it was the humans?

(cliMaTe CHANGEEEE)

Echo shivered slightly as she walked, even the smallest of breezes making her skin tingle with cold. The ground felt rough and unfamiliar on her bare feet.

Moony shifted into the stream. The water flowed over his aching back, and brought away the heat. He sighed gently in relief.

Echo climbed up on a rock and looked around, her yellow dress blowing around her knees. She looked around and put her arms out, laughing. “I’m on Earth!” She yelled happily.

Moony opened an eye when he heard someone scream. “They’re proud they’re here? The dirt-planet is a Hellish-orb.”

Echo looked back up at the sun and waved happily. Then she frowned. “Why’d you send me here?” She asked the sun.

The sun’s like, “Dunno bro ask yourself that.”

Moony shut his eyes again. “Hopefully that person doesn’t yell again.”
The stream gurgled in response.

Yeah and the stream can talk to too apparently.

Echo walked down the rock, talking to herself. “I need help, I mean, I don’t know where anything is. Aren’t there supposed to be more people here? Where is everyone?”

Dude gurgled is just a personification for the stream.

To be exactly realistic because authors can’t use literary tools, the rock didn’t respond. It just sat there.

Moony listened to the noises of the river. He soon heard a faint croak. “What is that?” He asked delicately, opening his eyes.

Mmkay

Echo suddenly found herself standing in ankle deep water. “It’s so cold!” She exclaimed, bending down to feel the water.

Moony opened his eyes, looking for the croaking. He found one of the dirt-planet’s toads sitting right on his chest.
“Hello dirt-planet inhabitant.”
It croaked at him.

“Everything is so cold here! She sat down, her feet dangling in the water.

Moony reached down his chest to the toad and booped the head of it.
It croaked dolefully.

Echo sighed and laid down. “What to do..”

Moony giggled gently and booped it again. “I suppose you like that, dirt-planet inhabitant?”
It croaked. He’s asking a rhetorical question to a toad.

Echo stood up and continued walking along the stream, the smooth pebbles shifting under her feet.

Moony laughed his deep laugh again. He booped the nose of the toad. It inflated in a croak.

Echo continued following the stream but stopped when she heard laughter. “A person..” She whispered.

Moony lifted up the toad. “You are my favorite dirt-planet inhabitant, now.”
Crooooooaaaak

“What’s it talking to?” She asked quietly, tilting her head slightly.

Moony laughed a deep laugh again. The toad croaked along with him.

Echo stepped out of the stream and hid behind a rock, watching the boy. “It’s a green thing..why is he talking to a green thing..”

“Most definitely my favorite dirt-planet inhabitant,” Moony repeated, picking up the toad. It croaked thankfully.

“Earth people are weird.” She decided, setting her head in her hands.

Moony heard someone talking and looked around. “Is that another inhabitant?”
The toad croaked.

Echo froze, looking down at the boy. “Maybe if I’m still enough the won’t notice me.” She whispered to herself.

Moony squinted around. “I heard a voice.”
Crooooaaaaaaaak