Could you critique my character Rie? Here's the link; Rie Katayama
Hi! Sorry it took me almost 3 months to get to this, but I finally did! I read through everything, and I love how much detail and thought you put into the character. I would like to ask the content that the character is being used in, due to how much there is to pick up on.
Rie is going to be used in a fantasy setting. I'm still working on how to expose the reader to her complex background, but thanks for the critique!
Rie is going to be used in a fantasy setting. I'm still working on how to expose the reader to her complex background, but thanks for the critique!
I think if you create well developed base to put her in, everything should fall into place!
Could you critique my character Nova? I worked really hard on her and I think I did well, thank youuuu~