forum Sci-Fi Dystopian Action Story- please critique my premise

Started March 18, 2018 by @AJ

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What about literature? Music? Entertainment?

Does technology look new and futuristic or is it new technology but looks like it from the 80s and/or 90s? IS THERE FLYING CARS!!! Or have we not advanced far enough?

What about what people look like now? Since you can genetically engineer how your child looks like, much like with the new concept of CRISPR? Does everyone look perfect?

Is everyone smart? Marnie's parents did make sure her DNA has the smart genes in them

How advanced is this world? Technologically and medically?

IS CANCER AND EBOLA CURED NOW?!!?! WHAT ABOUT OTHER DISEASES?!

Are humans considered below cyborgs since they don't have advanced senses or something like that.

Huh, that actually worked…

sorry for the enlarged text btw…

Just messing around

Is there different races now? Are Asians still called Asian or are they called by something else? What about black people? Or Hispanic? Or white people? Just everyone. Each country and city has new names so is their nationality/race similar to the name of their birth place?

Can anyone get cybernetic parts? Or only the rich or something?

What have you've thought about so far? For an example; society, government, society, technology, etc..

What type of cybernetics can people get? Is there robots?

IS THERE SENEIENT ROBOTS?!!

ARE THEY GONNA TAKE OVER THE WORLD?!?!!

Another tech idea, what if Marnie creates another metal to use to make cybernetic parts since I doubt The Borgs has the ability to get even cheap quality metal. Marnie was in desperate need of something to make and repair parts. What if she made a new alloy or found something else to use as a substitute?

Is Felix a cyborg too? Or does he have some genetic engineering to him like Marnie?

Are any of the main character's parents genetically alter in some way?

Another tech idea, since cyborgs can easily die from some trigger what if Marnie invents something to stop that from happening? The government would try to do that first to try and destroy this revolting group, so to make no one dies (mainly Felix's parents probably. I could see him begging Marnie to invent something to make sure his parents don't die).

Is Felix close to his family as well? What about his birth city?

What's the name of Marnie's and Felix's birth city?

Another tech idea, since cyborgs can easily die from some trigger what if Marnie invents something to stop that from happening? The government would try to do that first to try and destroy this revolting group, so to make no one dies (mainly Felix's parents probably. I could see him begging Marnie to invent something to make sure his parents don't die).

*to make sure

How smart is Marnie exactly?

I'm sorry if these questions are annoying seeing as I have so many…I hope these questions are at least helping you in some way. Just expect a lot of questions spamming you at some point during the day.

Are the cybernetic parts super op or just strengthen whatever part it is?

Can people teleport to different places? What about the concept of time travel?

I'm sorry if these questions are annoying seeing as I have so many…I hope these questions are at least helping you in some way. Just expect a lot of questions spamming you at some point during the day.

they aren't really criticism now that I think about it and your asking for constructive criticism for your story……………I'm really, really sorry if I'm being annoying to you with all these questions and all, I'll stop if it's too much. I'm way too tired for this. But hopefully these ideas and questions helped you out. I'm gonna go to sleep now, your probably sleeping now or just busy with something seeing as your not responding. I'm over thinking this aren't I…now I'm just writing my train of thought. Alright, that's enough for me

Are there just cyborgs in within The Borgs? Or are there also non-cyborgs as well within this group?

The short answer: Yes.

Are the seven senators cyborgs as well or not? Do cyborgs have a chance at gaining a position in government or they can't?

No. Cyborgs have very little input in the government, and zero chance at getting into any real positions of authority. However, not all veterans come home with injuries that require prosthetics. These veterans, in order to keep them happy, are usually given small/ insignificant jobs in the government (like being a secretary or something). This is justified because of their lack of cybernetic parts, which makes them no more dangerous than anyone else.
However, that doesn't mean that they can't be involved with The Borgs. There are actually several non-cyborg rebels that still have a bone to pick with the government. There are even rebels that were never part of the military in the first place- some, like Marnie, Felix, and Bowie (Felix's mom) are just citizens who want to change the way things are run.

I'm sorry if these questions are annoying seeing as I have so many…I hope these questions are at least helping you in some way. Just expect a lot of questions spamming you at some point during the day.

they aren't really criticism now that I think about it and your asking for constructive criticism for your story……………I'm really, really sorry if I'm being annoying to you with all these questions and all, I'll stop if it's too much. I'm way too tired for this. But hopefully these ideas and questions helped you out. I'm gonna go to sleep now, your probably sleeping now or just busy with something seeing as your not responding. I'm over thinking this aren't I…now I'm just writing my train of thought. Alright, that's enough for me

No, please don't think that! You aren't being annoying at all! These questions are actually really helpful. I wasn't responding because I was sleeping (we probably live in different timezones).