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I have a prompt and characters. I just need someone to help me flesh out the characters.
I have a prompt and characters. I just need someone to help me flesh out the characters.
Sup
The sky
Aha, that’s true
Lol sorry. I’m a smart ass sometimes
Same, buts it’s all good.
Alrighty so I guess I should spill the actual print and stuff now lol
So basically this boy and girl are on vacation and their total strangers. The guy is hanging out with his buddies and stares at the girl a lot. There’s major awkward eye contact for a couple days. The girl is on vacay with her best friend and her eye is always drawn to the boy. For whatever reason they get paired up to do some event thing at the hotel a few days in and have to talk. They hit it off and exchange numbers. Whenever they aren’t at the pool together theyre texting each other. Eventually they had to go home (the vacation lasts like 3 weeks for both of them). The girl has 2 gay dads and one is in the military. Her dad gets stationed in the same state as where the boy lives in and they end up at the same school and in a lot of classes.
That’s about as far as I’ve gotten but I’ve put a lot of thought into it and some of it is from my irl experiences. I thought it sounded cool and wanted to flesh it out a little bit.
Sorry I had to disappear on you, that sounds really cool!
All good! I had to go to bed anyway. But thanks. But I’m currently on vacation with my best friend and some of that stuff happened and it was my inspiration. Some of it I just thought up
I think it’s really good, sounds like a cool story
Thanks. I tried lol
So… how are we going to do this??
We can start the day the staring starts? I’m gonna do the girl tho btw. Hope you don’t mind, I’ll do the characters if your ready to start?
Yeah, I might not be on much but yeah, I’m ready.
That’s okay! I’ll do the characters in a few.
Okie dokie
Girl
Name: Paris Anderson
Age: 17
Sexuality: straight
Personality: smart, nice, is shy at first but then let’s loose once she gets to know you, very bouncy and draws attention to herself.
Looks: long brown hair that hangs curly down to her mid back, ocean blue eyes, 5’3”, sun kissed skin, brightens a room when she smiles and makes everyone melt with her laugh.
Outfit: usually jean shorts and a plain shirt, typically pink, coral, or maroon.
Swimsuit: hot pink halter bikini top and plain black bikini bottoms
Hobbies: staring and Brennan before they meet, and texting him after they meet. Reading, writing, hanging out with her best friend.
Usual day to day stuff: same as hobbies. Swimming, going to the beach, dinner with her best friends family.
Boy
Name: Brennan McCarthy
Age: 18
Sexuality: straight
Personality: draws attention to himself with out meaning too, confident, caring
Looks: 5’10”, hair; https://goo.gl/images/eNgfGH but sandy blonde and light brown, muscular, has a heart stopping smile.
Outfit: a blue top of some sort and khaki shorts, and flip flops
Swimsuit: blue stripped trunks that start with dark stripes and ombré down to light blue and eventually to a solid white.
Hobbies: dodging the “vacation whore” named Vanessa, swimming, going to the beach.
Usual day to day stuff: same as hobbies, hanging with his buddies, taking care of his 5 year old brother.
Sorry it took so long!!! Was busy
That’s fine
I’m on vacation, or was it because we’re leaving in the morning and it’s night time right now. But I’ll be 100% free after that.
Okay, that’s all good
We can get started if you want
Okay, can u start?
Sure! Where do you want to start?
Uh, I don’t mind, where ever you do
(Okay)
Paris walked out the back doors with her best friend Madylin in tow. They were chatting and laughing as always down to a few open chairs to drop their towels and slip in the pool. They walk by ‘surfer dude’, as they had nicknamed him yesterday so they could talk about him since they didn’t know his real name, in the pool with his friends.
“Hey look it’s surfer dude!” Madylin said in a hushed, but excited, whisper.
“Maddy shh. Don’t want him to hear!” Paris said in a similar hushed whisper, sliding down into the pool, Madylin following suit.
Brennan idly swam around with his friends, enjoying the relaxation. His eyes were being drawn to a girl and her friend that had just arrived at the pool. He knew his friends could tell, they always did but chose not to comment about it. Brennan shook his head and snapped out of it, retuning his attention back to his friends.
Paris could feel eyes on her but ignored it for the moment. She immediately dove underwater and stood on her hands and sat there for a couple seconds and dropped back down and resurfaced. Madylin was currently doing a backflip, so Paris let her attention wander and her eyes landed on ‘surfer dude’ as usual. She felt as though she had a magnet that connected with one he had that drew her to him.
Brenna couldn’t help but look the girls way again. it was weird to him, he normally didn’t do this and on vacation where he would probably never see her again? He tried to keep his attention on his friends and what they talking about with no luck, he kept zoning out.
Paris swam to the pools edge where there was a small step a foot below the water to sit on and sat on said step. Madylin followed her and sat beside her.
“Don’t look how but I think he’s staring at you again” Madylin whispered excitedly. Paris couldn’t help but look and sure enough he was staring. They made awkward eye contact and she quickly looked away back to Madylin who sat in the perfect spot, thus making it easier for Paris to take quick glances at ‘surfer dude’ and then back to Madylin who rambled about video games and a boy she liked.
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