forum Need character or plot help come here

Started July 20, 2018 by @Lonnie

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I'll critique anything you want me to just please keep cussing to a minimum

Critique my baby? Javi Ramirez

Your character is really good but you put missing tooth on identifying marks why is his tooth missing is there a story to that but besides that he's a great character

Okay thanks

Could you critique my character Rie? Here's the link; Rie Katayama