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tune

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She's afraid of everyone because of her father. No one came to help her when she was being beaten, so she grew up thinking everyone was like him.

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That was the only one I could think of as an absolute.

@@Rubyjane

@Allatron
I loved her backstory!!
I would add more detail in every section in her looks and nature!! She has the potential to be a very interesting and thought out character!!
Also no other nicknames? Her brother or mother never called her Liv or Livy?

@@Rubyjane

Flowerfur, Lover of Seliph
Wow! She is so interesting!!
First, I know you probably haven't gotten to all this because of her being made so soon but:
No full name? Not even a last name?
What kind of light brown hair? Does is have blonde highlights? Is it darker on the top or bottom?
Is her hair curly, straight, frizzy, or maybe wavy?
Are all of her scales the exact same color?
What shade of teal?
You should probably add more to her backstory, it seems interesting but it could use a bit more detail
I would continue to develop and add more detail but she sounds really interesting.

@@Rubyjane

I sometimes forget to capitalize, I'll fix it:) Everyone has different/odd colored eyes, it's essential to the plot. Not as of yet they have not created a religion. Thx

@TheMusicalVampire

@Flowerfur, Lover of Seliph
Because red heads rarest mix is red hair and blue eyes so, I thought since he is rare I shall make him also be a rare red head.
Thanks for your thoughts on him!

tori

@3abbie3 Premium Supporter

Thanks in advance!!!

@3abbie3 Premium Supporter

Support is still a placeholder as I'm not exactly sure what to call the role each of them play in the story. Each of them plays a similar role helping out the main characters in their trials and giving guidance along the way.