forum One of you Killed Her (Deserted Island RP | Closed)

Started May 16, 2022 by Deleted user

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((Thank you, Celeste!)

(Hello! Welcome! I trust that you're a good writer but for equality can I get a writing sample? haha))

(Here’s my lil sample)

Ryder strides across the road in the rain, an arm above his head as if it would actually block anything. He heads down the block, the black jar tucked under his arm, and whistles quietly as he strolls along.
Sh!t, the rain is really picking up. I’ll take Gabriel back with me so he doesn’t get soaked.
He pauses by an old gas station that’s long since been abandoned, stepping through the broken glass of the door. In the far corner, over by the restrooms, Gabriel leans against the wall, limp and still. He perks up a little once he hears and smells Ryder, and by ‘perks up’ I mean he starts to grumble and try to stand. His foot is fettered to the nearest shelf with a dog leash so he doesn’t get far, but he reaches forward.
Ryder smiles, dodging a leak from the ceiling. “Heyyy, Vamp. I didn’t think to check for leaks earlier. You all dry?”
He casually approaches him, not worried because of the muzzle on his face and gloves zip-tied onto his hands.
Once he is in arms reach, Gabriel claws at his arm, relentlessly trying to bite him through the muzzle. Ryder only ruffles his hair, bending down and undoing the leash.
“Wanna come up with me? I’m sure David has another test for you anywho.”
A few raindrops leak in through the ceiling above them, steadily dripping on Gabriel’s beanie as Ryder hooks the leash onto the the zip tie on Gabriel’s wrist.

Name: Biba Baladin
Age: (20-25) 21
Physical Features:
Biba is about 5’10” and weighs around 178lbs I think. I’ve had some people call her stocky and i think it fits. She carries her weight healthy and well, some of it being muscle and some honestly just being her big bones (ofc body fat too, she’s far from a twig). She is a lil curvy, and has broader shoulders and big thighs, I’d say. Her skin is fair, but I think it’s more of a grayish tan than a smooth porcelain. Her hair is long, falling to her waist, and is curly and jet black. It falls in ringlets and though it doesn’t look super greasy, it probably feels greasy. It’s not super thick or big, just very long. She has thick, dark brows and smaller, dark brown eyes. In most lighting her eye color could even come across as black. Her nose is long and rounded, being more on the broad side, and she has plump, round lips. Her jaw is more square and her cheeks are decently full. She has a few moles on her face, the most noticeable being two horizontally under her right eye(the left mole is smaller), one directly above the left side of her lip, and another in the center of her forehead. She has long, dark lashes and round ears, covered in small hoops and cuffs. She looks uneasy or like she has somewhere to be, whether or not she does, always seeming a little uncomfortable. She has like probably five small, fine tattoos of just writing. Like a few Russian words. One on the inside of her left wrist that reads ‘Четыре окровавленные руки’ in one line, one vertical on the back right side of her right ankle that says ‘Кловис Джеймс Бенджамин Каспиан‘ in two lines. The other tattoos are covered. She’s great at avoiding eye contact and honestly isn’t that sociable, but despite her being a lil socially awkward, she’s pretty likable and is a little too loyal. She has a spiked septum piercing along with a piercing on either side of her nose that she keeps silver posts in with a small chain across the top of her nose attaching them. She has her left eyebrow pierced and a tongue piercing.
Typical Clothing Style: She wears a lot of browns, grays, blacks, blues and whites in the form of big, loose necked T-shirts that definitely came from the mens section, straight or wide cut pants or jeans, taller socks that almost reach her knee and are covered in various dull patterns, combat boots or sneakers, ball caps, bucket hats, woven belts and sling backpacks.
Relation to Harper Becker:
Fears: Large bodies of water make her really uncomfortable if she cannot see land and is like inside of them. Like swimming lol. She’s not a fan of big dogs but its less of they scare her and more of she’s uneasy around unfamiliar ones. Her biggest fear is losing track of her little boys, Ben and Clovis, and not knowing where they are or them suddenly being taken or moved without her knowledge. It’s something that I’m sure every parent is afraid of, but it’s like a crippling fear to her. It’s always in the back of her mind.
Three words/phrases to describe personality: Biba takes a very long time to trust someone, or sometimes never actually comes around to the idea. Despite being untrusting, she’s loyal to a fault, even if you’re not trustworthy. She’s also very withdrawn, always seeming to be a little out of it or socially uncomfortable.
Other: Biba is Russian. Both of her parents are Russian and she’d lived in Russia her whole life. Her English isn’t perfect, but it’s decent. It’s definitely not annoying lol, her grammar is just flawed.
Link to a digital painting I did of her. :’) The man with her in the top left is Alexei, her lover.