Here's my character names (anyone can critique them and everyone ass plots and extra details if you'd like extra is better in my opinion also if you want to add a few extra characters put them under {added characters} please)
Elizabeth
Megan
(i really need male characters, please help)
Would love to hear your thoughts on my villain Helga:
Please help! Something is off about him
Hello! So I was wondering if you could maybe critique 4 of my characters? GASP I know, i know, four characters. But maybe you could anyway please?
Ambrose: Ambrose Camron McKingly
Clement: Clement Jonathan Greene
These next 2 are jokes
Skelly: Skelly Fishington
Ariella: Ariella Lea Greene