@writers_goddamn_block group
okayyyyyyyyy. im going to put up a different WIP, I'll pull three chapters from the middle.
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Teaser????
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https://www.notebook.ai/documents/103946
this is a sucky second teaser.
@writers_goddamn_block group
and you have to be reeeeeely mean and nitpicky about details (not grammar)
@saor_illust school
Well… if you want some critique on that, then sure, I'll help out~
The very first thing is I can't view it aha
@writers_goddamn_block group
oh
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@saor_illust school
nah, doesn't work
here, try this.
go to said document and pretend as if you were going to make some changes to it, but then click about, which should be in the top right corner
click share this document, and enable link-sharing
@andrew health_and_safety flash_onAdmin
(oof, looks like I might have broken the ability to make documents public past night. I'll get that fixed in tonight's release. Sorry about that!)
@Anemone eco
(LOL. It's alright, andrew (Our Supreme Lord and Overseer). Thanks for being awesome, dude.)
@saor_illust school
(Oh that's okay aha! And like Nie said, thanks again for being awesome!)
@andrew health_and_safety flash_onAdmin
(It's fixed now, but @writers_goddamn_block will have to make the document public again, since the bug was in saving doc privacy changes!)
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@saor_illust school
Alright, I can take a smol peek at it now, but I won't be able to finish until at or after school
@saor_illust school
The actual first thing i have to say about this is that it tends to switch from past tense to present tense almost immediately. And then back to past tense after a little bit. Maybe change that? I personally find that a bit confusing.
@writers_goddamn_block group
The actual first thing i have to say about this is that it tends to switch from past tense to present tense almost immediately. And then back to past tense after a little bit. Maybe change that? I personally find that a bit confusing.
on it
@SpookyJim
oh my god lord andrew (Our Supreme Lord and Overseer) is here!
See, I told you it was good @writers_goddamn_block !
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I love the names you used!