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@evastardust groupRRAAAARRL

But he did exactly what he always said he would!

NO
HE. DESERVED. MORE.

BUT IT'S POETIC
HE DID EXACTLY WHAT HE SAID HE WOULD
AND HE SMILED FOR THE FIRST TIME EVER

I ABOUT DIED WHEN HE SMILED.
BUT I STILL THINK THAT HE SHOULD HAVE–CENSORED–MORE OF A SATIFYING ENDING.
IT WAS POOR WRITING.
BUT I UNDERSTAND JJ ABRAMS REASONING.

I UNDERSTAND WHERE YOU'RE COMING FROM BUT I THINK IT WORKED
Also I've slowly Ben collecting tiny Kylos and I think you'll appreciate that.

@ElderGod-kirky group

Dom, question:

I don't mean to question your judgement, it's just hard for me to wrap my head around your statement of me being at least top 20, when there are so many people on this site. How did you come to that conclusion?

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Dom, question:

I don't mean to question your judgement, it's just hard for me to wrap my head around your statement of me being at least top 20, when there are so many people on this site. How did you come to that conclusion?

Well I do admit I was being illogically nice. It happens every once in a while. But I feel like you’re all over the RPs here. I might be wrong. But my casual and slightly subconscious and illogical line of thought was that you being around a lot would = great skills being made.

@ElderGod-kirky group

And, I've only been roleplaying for a few months, and now it's mostly with friends like Baylee, Crocs, and a few others. I rarely join group roleplays. I used to be more active, but that was because I had the time and was bored a lot

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I used to be more active, but that was because I had the time and was bored a lot

heh. mood

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Ah, I figured it was you being nice, lol. Might I counter that just because someone is around a lot, that doesn't equal to their skills?

I feel found out. Yikes. Please give me a link to a RP you did well in so that I have a chance at my answer being truthful (though of course that will not justify my reckless saying).

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Yaknow those 10x mirrors are great until you see every single flaw in your face

@croccin-champagne

ooo. you can actually see some improvement in that one, circe, from both of us as time went on. when i go back to find something and read through it it's kinda interesting. you've improved some since we started that, tho tbh you were already great

@ElderGod-kirky group

It's our oldest one, so I'd assume there's visible improvement. Also, there's been more planning ahead behind the scenes, the further along we got. ghfjgh Just like what we're doing right now

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Boom. I rated you. (10 equals amazing.)

General quality: 9/10
Plot moving: 8/10
Length: 8/10
Natural dialogue: 8/10

(Just a matter of personal taste.)
Subtlety: 5/10

Obviously I haven’t seen enough of your work to make a proper judgement. But I feel messed up from saying something nice before considering.

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

…Being sneaky in your writing I suppose? I try to do this a lot. It easier to pull things out if they were kept shaded beforehand. It’s not actually necessary though. Just a tool used in specific circumstances.