forum Things You Want LESS Of In Books

Started January 21, 2019 by @evastardust groupRRAAAARRL

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I don't remember lol I haven't read it in years but I remember how mad that scene made me

I bet.

Jo didn't do anything, she just got really angry and then refused to take her anywhere and that's why the whole amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) almost drowning thing happened

Because amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) was like 'I'll go skating alone!' like an idiot

no she tried to catch up w them but didnt check where the ice was thinner

"If it's blue, you'll fall through", that's the saying right?

I never liked amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) I didn't like how she married what's his face it just didn't feel right it felt forced

YES I AGREE
Also I'm just now realizing I have characters named Joan/Jo, Meg, and amy (the most wonderful woman in the world), and one who I don't write with but use for random stuff named Beth lmao. Although Meg and Joan are the only 2 in the same universe.

Maybe it feels more natural in the actual book? I haven been able to bring myself to read it because it's extremely boring according to my siblings and a lot more religious

it's not natural in the book either

Didn't she and Laurie just go on 1 picnic and then BAM proposal?

yeah but they had some other hints at romance from before but it was weird cuz she was rlly young

She was a hecking child
She was like 10

Okay, dear people that haven't learned how to drive
Please don't write about driving. It's really obvious that you can't drive

And? You can just research how to. I can't drive but that doesn't mean I can't write about a road trip

I think they mean in detail, If you're writing about a road trip just don't focus completely on what's going on on the road.

Yeah, I had an explanation typed and then I accidentally refreshed and it got deleted. I mean when they talk about what the character is doing or noticing and it seems like that when you're watching but once you start driving or go to drivers ed or something, you can tell that's not what they were doing or thinking about. Like, a character shouldn't be exhausted and be daydreaming about their boyfriend and listening to music and maybe be tipsy and still be able to drive properly

Also jynnie aren't you learning to drive rn? (Not trying to sound rude, just trying to put together pieces)

No, I'm not taking driver's ed until I'm 18.

Oh I daydream all the time while driving. Once you get used to it (driving for a few years) you can certainly multitask while driving.

Seems important

I’ve seen it and love it.

Poor Alpaca man

How does he not think someone would want an alpaca?!

The real question is why someone wouldn't want an alpaca?

Fussy landlords

I want a llama so I can train it to spit on the people I don't like

^This is what we should be thinking about for New Years.

dang it, I've been laughing for a minute straight, send help

Wait I just realized that means you can rent an alpaca (duh how did I not realize that) and I wanna know what people do with them