forum poetry sharing!!

Started February 01, 2019 by @croccin-champagne

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camie u cant hide from me. show us your poetry. i've never actually seen bad-no wait, my siblings are really bad, but thats besides the point

Fine…

!!!!!!!

Er, I have a few…
Most are based on nature.

show us show us show us

Change
People change.
This is proven.
I do not understand this –
Shouldn't you be happy with
The way that you are?
Or is your desire for more just
Too strong?
I want to tell you how much I
Hate this thing that has replaced you.
But I cannot bring myself to.
Because this monster of change –
Behind it is still
You.

u r legally required to show us now

It sucks, sorry…

camie have i ever told u how much i love u. bcs i love u and ur poetry

Shut up, that's terrible! X~X

nope

Uh, yup!

nu uh

I don't think we read the same poem.

ur the one who wrote it. I liked it. a lot

Wanna read a crappy poem I wrote in 5th grade?

yES

Selfie Poem
by: Fifth Grade Camie

My hair is like and muddy tide pool, dripping just past my shoulder banks

My eyes are like chocolate, glistening in the warm summer sun

My lips are borders, like a photograph, just framing my perfect smile

My brain is a safe for information, a safe that no one can rob

My heart holds memories that I will treasure forever

I live in books and eat WORDS

For the record, I have no idea why I thought I was so perfect… this is bad.

that last line is my favorite

Mine too, lol.

it's actually really good, 'specially for a poem u wrote in fifth grade. i trashed all mine before like a year ago, and te oldest one is a bit…odd

My fifth grade self thanks you.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YhCf-nynXAW2p6tIlXdyLASG13BIUZ04sjlNXsfVotw/edit?usp=sharing i'm sharing one of my weird ones as a thank you

That's not bad!

its not horrible. just not good

I like it. It's… mysterious….

our streetlight was flickering bcs it needed replaced and i was feeling dramatic and tired. its one of my favorites. u should share more

I don't have many more… I do these things though, they're really fun, and it's kind of like a writing exercise for me… you describe colors without saying the name of the color.

oh?