forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!
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What if his brother was actually hanging with the witches a lot after getting banished and just kinda helped them out with the association, so when Lunos is there raiding the main base with the trio, they find a painting/picture of him, just a small one stuffed away.

YES!

@CopperQueen

What if his brother was actually hanging with the witches a lot after getting banished and just kinda helped them out with the association, so when Lunos is there raiding the main base with the trio, they find a painting/picture of him, just a small one stuffed away.

YES!

And one of the witches jokngly go "Ha! A fae. He looks a bit like you!" and Lunos just has the most confused face ever

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Exactly! Oh wait, I meant to put the drawing me and Bee made on google docs.
Remind me in a few hours
-Lex

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What does that mean?

Nah, it's okay, I remembered that I have way too much on my plate.

@CopperQueen

Exactly! Oh wait, I meant to put the drawing me and Bee made on google docs.
Remind me in a few hours
-Lex

It's been a few hours now, remember to do it!

@CopperQueen

Ok… so would they have weapons or just magic? And would Taramy have to learn to use weapins)

They struggle to teach Taramy witchcraft (Wich is what the trio does) but she does better with wepons, especially long distance because she's scared to go to close to the often surperior enemies

@CopperQueen

She should have a taser!

What if she already owns the tazer
And she tazes one of the witches when she's new and they look all scary and tough
And they're like "mAGiC tecNOloGY WITchCRaFt whAT Is tHIS"

@CopperQueen

Let's keep that in the story as a humor element. Then Taramy could be like "but aren't you witches?"

"YES BUT WHAT THE HELL IS THIS"

@CopperQueen

"Compacted electricity in a small battery which is released via small darts. This can be shot over a distance of 11 meters and is pretty powerful."

Geranium: "???????????????????????????????????"
Terimane: "SWEET"

@CopperQueen

Hey can we develop the Lunos brother story?
Why he was banished and how he was involved in the association etc.
I really like the Lunos siblings I'm sorry

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Me too, I was thinking he could have a really normal name like: "Charles"
It's not like I already created an entire character based off the concept…

@CopperQueen

Me too, I was thinking he could have a really normal name like: "Charles"
It's not like I already created an entire character based off the concept…

You did, didn't you?
Mind sharing?

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His name is Charles, Charlie for short. He has hair that imitates blue slime and often drips in his face. He has a normal arm and then he has an arm made of the same substance as his hair and it can morph into random things. He's really nice, but is vey shy. He rebeled from the family and became a killer known by the name: *I haven't decided yet, I'm thinking something like The Dripping Killer.

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Oh, and he has a black mask with blue designs that look like dripping coming fromm the eyes.

@CopperQueen

His name is Charles, Charlie for short. He has hair that imitates blue slime and often drips in his face. He has a normal arm and then he has an arm made of the same substance as his hair and it can morph into random things. He's really nice, but is vey shy. He rebeled from the family and became a killer known by the name: *I haven't decided yet, I'm thinking something like The Dripping Killer.

Maybe we need a bit motivation for why he would be a killer. I always imagined him as this nice yet shy person but he puts on a shell of confidence and tries to be inspiring, but doesn't actually think he's good enough to be in a role of importance.

Also we need to align him to Lunos via some genetic features so they all kind of seem related