forum Brainstorming+writing practice: Let's make a novel!

Started December 28, 2018 by @CopperQueen

tune

Im too lazy to read all of this… Can someone please summerize it?

Lunos pretends he's not Lunos to get information about his brother

Also Taramy-Charlie paralells and Taramy is a videogame nerd

Im too lazy to read all of this… Can someone please summerize it?

Lunos pretends he's not Lunos to get information about his brother

Also Taramy-Charlie paralells and Taramy is a videogame nerd

yay

hi

Heyo!

I'm not dead, just lazy, and here is the progress of the magmaid design (I've only done the skin and part of the eyes)

https://ibb.co/vqswdvS

Looks awesome!

I REALLY like the magmaid design, good job!

It's an amazing design!! Although in my own opinion, your can use it or not lol, I think having a darker top would look better

It's an amazing design!! Although in my own opinion, your can use it or not lol, I think having a darker top would look better

I haven't shaded the top yet so that's an easy change, I'll find a darker color

Ok, I'm glad you aren't getting mad at me for criticizing your design

Ok, I'm glad you aren't getting mad at me for criticizing your design

Of course not, criticism is helpful! Is there anything else you see that could use some changing?

Not criticism, but do they have any accessories or weapons?

I had an idea and I even made a stupid drawing and everything but my camera is acting up so I'm just gonna say it:
Anti-syren glasses made from rubies put together by wire and wichever one of them wears it has it around their neck and just holds it in front of their eyes to not be affected. (Not something they would wear everyday, just some extra equipement)

That's a cool idea but wouldn't earrings work better? Cuz sound cancelling lol

That's a cool idea but wouldn't earrings work better? Cuz sound cancelling lol

I can actually add that idea to the picture if we go with that

oh hi

That's a cool idea but wouldn't earrings work better? Cuz sound cancelling lol

I can actually add that idea to the picture if we go with that

That would be cool, I'm woring on drawing the desinds for the twins.

Hey, so about a week or so ago I made this outfit Lunos or Kerrigan (I think)

And recently I drew this bird and thought "Hey, maybe that's what Lunos's mask is made from."

Idk why I shared this. I just wanted to have at least a little bit of a way to contribute I guess?

Dang it! I can't see it!

dang

ttps://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/491086578370740224/534923590282248202/image0.jpg

ttps://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/491086578370740224/531305113084624916/image0.jpg

add an H to the beginning of them

A bunch of that is blocked on my computer, can you put it onto a google doc?

added the H

That looks like the most adorable, dorky-ass bird that would be common in the Northern fae area for like warm pet companions.

It's beak and legs have a wood-like texture and it's feathers can change color depending on what kind of tree it's in

Yes wood birds! So they are common pets but some people use the beak for different stuff ex. the mask?

https://ibb.co/106ghvp

-I know the fins and tail look weird, I'm trying to fix them, but is this a better shirt color?

I really like it! But… if you made it a bit more red and brown, it would probably look better.

https://ibb.co/106ghvp

-I know the fins and tail look weird, I'm trying to fix them, but is this a better shirt color?

I love it! What if you added 'cracks'? Basiclly black lines on the shirt? If you dknt use it, it's already amazing just how it is!!!