forum If you're character were to die, what would he/she say before they passed?

Started January 22, 2018 by @Astrid

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This post is making me depressed

I haven't actually planned for any of my characters to die but if they did this is probably how it would happen:
Rin: "H-huh? I don't… I don't understand. W-why would you…."
Ken'Ichirou: "F-fuck you…Pops…"
Aiko: "Geez. Th-this is a lot more painful than I thought it was going to be."
Akane: "Aiko! Watch out!"
K BF: "I guess this is how it ends….I deserve this."
Daichi: "Heh…I've had a long run….just, l-look after them for me….please…."
Quinn: "Damnit! Just when I'd won…Just when I'd…"
Pavone: "This isn't how it was supposed to end!"

Luna: please don’t let me die.. I-I love you minkei… goodbye..dies

Minkei: fuck the world! stabs himself while he’s already dying oof

Krystalie: find thoever killed me and muted them in the worst way possible; with a pineapple up their ass and choking on a dick! runs and jumps off a cliff

I have some more characters but they wouldn’t be the ones to die, they are the ones who killed the three ubove. (Those three I listed are either annoying or rude as hell)

Mr. Marvellous: "Oh bugger, what a pity…"

I have been working on a book, I don't have anything actually written out but I have planned a lot of it.
A not so quick preview: Edward and Azai are brothers, they get kidnapped when they were really young and are spliced with animals, after they were kidnapped they didn't see each other so they don't know what happened to the other, Edward was a spliced with a wolf and Azai with a cougar.
Edward escapes after he is (falsely) told his brother died, and lives a mainly normal life in the woods so no one can see his wolf half he has a family consisting of a wife, an adopted son (who is a wolf) a son (who was also part wolf because of the splicing), and a newborn baby girl. He became well known as the hero Wolf.
Azai was never told that his brother escaped and was told if he did whatever the told him to they would free both of them after his job was done. He was ordered to kill Wolfs family and then kill Wolf under the name Cougar, he kills Wolfs family, unknowingly killing his family.

He finally finds Wolf heartbroken and ready to die, he takes off his helmet and takes his katana stabbing him in the heart Edward uses his leftover energy to take of his own helmet both brothers eyes widening "Brother" Edward weakly smiles "you're alive." Azai has tears running down his face sobbing "Brother?" he starts desperately trying to stop the blood flow "No, stay with me!" he cradles his brothers head "stay with me, please… please."

"How, Darling, did you know?" The man said, approaching Absinthe.

"That the Devil was in Los Angeles?" Absinthe said with a laugh, "Well, I can smell the fire and brimstone from a mile away,"

The Devil scoffed. Acting quickley, He lunged ahead and burried a knife deep into her stomach. "Have fun in Hell," He whispered into the girl's ear, before letting her go.

Absinthe gripped his shoulders, "Then I'll see you there," She said, before removing her mouth from his ear. Blood dripped out of her mouth and stained her teeth, "Dad,"

Absinthe collapsed on the ground, surrounded by a pool of blood. Slowly, grey wings unfurled from her back, a mark from a fallen angel. The wings suddenly burned away and all Lucifer could do was stare at the corpse of his fallen daughter.

All he could mutter is, "What have I done?"

Author's note: Not up to my usual standard. It is really bad so I apologize

S'okay.

Tyler lay on the ground staring at me. Something was different. In his eyes something changed. He weakly smiled and me. Blood pooled from his body onto the concrete. The rest of the world seemed to fade away into darkness.
I keeled by Tyler stroking his head, running my fingers through his hair. I knew that I couldn't do anything to save him. The wounds were too much and he already lost too much blood. The only thing I could do was to make his death a comfortable one.
It was like I could feel his pain. His confliction with himself and his feelings. He wasn't ready to die, he was scared. He was in pain. Emotional and physical. He held onto his life with a weak grip.
"Colby," Tyler weakly muttered.
"Shhh," I hushed him and smiled holding back a thousand tears.
"Colby…I love…you." He smiled at me while a tear trailed from the corner of his eye and down his cheek. He finally said it. He finally told me that he loved me.
I couldn't do it anymore, I started to cry silently. "I know," I smiled, my hands now shaking. "I love you too." I could feel his body go loose in my hands. I knew that his time was up. I lifted his head to mine and pressed my forehead against his. I held his body close to me as I said, "I just realized it too late."

Tolkalee. "Sorry."

Her laugh slowly turned into a cough. Harsh enough that soon she was on the floor. The boys tried to save her, but it was too late. She had died, not being able to breathe. Lies had destroyed her. And everybody ignored her final words.

I doubt my characters would have last words because their injuries are usually so bad that they die too quickly to say goodbye.

I am a fair creator. I give my characters swift (still painful) deaths.

Majority of my monster characters wouldn't say anything. Versin'll just lay down and die from battle injuries. Some of them might roar, others might not be able to make any noise because of how painful their death is, or depending on how they even died in the first place.

Sinistra would probably be very, very angry at her death. She'd probably say some very vulgar words (in multiple languages.) Skipping the vulgar languages, she'd also say something along the lines of "not making her mark on this world" (though in all honesty she does in the story, just not a good one.) That, or she wouldn't get to say anything, since almost all of my Eldritch horrors tend to die very quick or painful deaths.

Ebrioxhotl has already died (killed by three of his offspring/creations.) Despite this, he wasn't very shocked at all, but rather, before getting torn apart, said some words, like a speech, then finished off with "I have always known this would happen. I accept this; as this is my fate."

One of my characters didn't say anything. Some guy just punched him and he hot his head on a rock and was killed. There was no speaking before that. Just a zombie and a monologue afterwards

Hinata: "Finally free…"
Her sister, with tears: "Mom… Dad… I'm home…"
Her boyfriend/husband: "I guess I wasn't meant to… metallic wheeze …live…" Metalic clicks as he shuts down
Her robot son: "Mother… I'm scared…"
Her "brother": "I'm sorry Hinata… perhaps now, though, your soul with be whole again…"
Her boyfriend/the other one: "I'm so sorry… I didn't know I could… die… twice…"

Quinn: "But.. Compass… there's so much I never did…"
Compass: "See you on the other side, Fearless Leader."
Alex: "My future, it was so bright."
Eddy: "I've always wondered what happens after this."

S: "Huh, this is.. unexpected." she shakily stumbles backwards and lets out an exasperated sigh when her legs decide to give out from under her without her permission and she lands flat on her behind. A heavy shadow falls over her and she almost laughs. She had always expected to die in a blaze of fury, maybe even had her head lobbed off before she would know what was happening.
PTB: "Don't fight it, it will be easier if you just give in."
S: "You would say that, piece-" her final words become a gurgle of blood as the rider drives his sword down, shoulder to hip.

Susie: I don't understand.

Tell her that I love her or I will come back and haunt you until you do.