forum (I want to do a camp rp because I’m bored.) Camp Willow Lake (Closed 8/8 yeet)

Started December 17, 2018 by Deleted user

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Cool, I'll get stated on it.//

Alex gave a smile as he watched the campers stream in through the main gates, he just knew this would be a good year, he just knew it.

"ALEX!" Sarah waved at him "The campers look livelier then usual don't they?" She smiled widely at him. She seemed happier than normal

(@Forever Alone sorry to burst your bubble but the rules say no one liners. Try to have more then one line of text.)

(SORRY)

Tonya walked over to her moms car door and knocked on the window, she waved and smiled at her giving her the signal that she collected all her stuff. She had her left hand holding the handle bar for her first suit case, her backpack was resting easily on her shoulders, and her right hand held her favorite object, her stuffed Link plushie she loved dearly. She began to walk over to the opened gate, a nice looking place all things considered, she thought it would be much nicer from the price her mom had to pay for her to come.

(@Forever Alone sorry to burst your bubble but the rules say no one liners. Try to have more then one line of text.)

(SORRY)

(Thanks for fixing it! And don’t worry, I make mistakes like that as well. Once we get really into this rp you might have to make it a minimum of five lines when it gets interesting.)

Alex bounded over to the new camper, holding out his clipboard and looking at it. "You must be Tonya! It'sawesoem to meet you!" He exclaimed energetically as he held out the clipboard for her to check her name off.

What did you do?//

Alex bounded over to the new camper, holding out his clipboard and looking at it. "You must be Tonya! It'sawesoem to meet you!" He exclaimed energetically as he held out the clipboard for her to check her name off.

Tonya shyly held her Link plushie to her chest. “Uh… yes… I’m Tonya…”
Tonya’s mind went into panic, she didn’t know what to do or say at that moment, she was so confused for how someone was already so nice to her when she just arrived. “U-Uh um… where’s the area to put my stuff…?”

What did you do?//

(I oofed. I put a response that was supposed to be before yours but then you posted yours and I do that a lot so don’t worry about it.)

"Sure thing! I can show you to your "sector"." He said with a smiled as he noticed her Link plushie. "Oh! That's Link, right? From Legends Og Zelda? My friend is obsessed with that game." He asked, hoping his barrage of questions didn't overwhelm her.

No, I said OG.//

Tonya patted the plushies head and whipped dirt off of it. “Yep… he’s my favorite character from the games… I have a Zelda plushing im my backpack along with a Ganondorf plushie… i got the three for Christmas.”
She waited patiently for him to start walking towards the sleeping area for her to grab her suitcase once again.

"Okay great! What's your favorite color? Animal? Do you have siblings?" He asked, his extroverted nature taking over as he asked about the younger girl.

Abigail walked over to a small group of people. She stood to the side and watched them conversing. She didn't want to be here but she had no choice, so faking a smile was what she was planning on doing during her stay.

“My favorite color is Lilac… I don’t really have a favorite animal but I love guinea pigs and cats… I have a brother named John… he’s 26 and visits from time to time to play some video games with me…”
Tonya began to grow more nervous by the questions, she tried not to burst out into tears from the anxiety building inside of her. She didn’t know what to do so she stood there not moving at all.

Abigail walked over to a small group of people. She stood to the side and watched them conversing. She didnt want to be here but she had no choice, so a faking a smile was what she was planning on doing during her stay.

(*Didn’t
So a faking a smile makes no sense. Remove the a after so.)

Sarah walked over to Alex "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile

Sarah walked over to Alex "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile

(There should be a period after the first Alex, and a question mark after uncomfortable, Tonya isn’t capitalized, put a period after Tonya because you are starting a new sentence, you forgot the period at the end of the paragraph.)

Sarah walked over to Alex. "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to Tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile.

(Thank you!)

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Sarah walked over to Alex. "You're doing it again Alex. Can't you see she's uncomfortable." She waved to Tonya "You must be the new girl. Hi! I'm Sarah," she said with a smile.

Tonya nervously held out her hand. “I-I’m Tonya… it’s nice to meet you…”
She held her plushie tightly, as if it was a stress ball. “Um… can we go to the sleeping area now…?”