forum POEMS post 'em here my friends!

Started February 07, 2019 by @ember-chan-will-never-forget-you

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That's okay! Quality over quantity, right?

Yeah. I can post one in, like, 15-20 minutes ish maybe?

Alright!

Okay, change of plans… XD I'll do it in half an hour! Sorry, classes…

oh oof lol

hey u know that one poem i wrote??
about the boy??
yep that is the reason i'm crying on the inside

Aww, Ember… If you ever need to talk, I'm here, okay?

hey u know that one poem i wrote??
about the boy??
yep that is the reason i'm crying on the inside

panic told me about what happened in german, you okay? lemme know if you need to talk my favorite murderer <3

Mine are short…

Mine too. Don't worry about it.

XP

(So this one's a little personal so it might not make sense)

Bad Weather

It's all in your head
Dreaming in bed
For hopeless things
For present kings
If I had just tried
Swallowed my pride
Took off the blind
Someone to find
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Lying freak
Tongue-in-cheek
Hater who
Doesn't know what to do
An empty soul
A hungry ghoul
Who won't
Eat because of the front
She's created
Won't you stay alive
Take the dive
Bones, heart shatter
Doesn't matter
You're a missing brick
A tockless tick
They should be glad
Why are they sad?
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Smoking wreck
Unsigned check
Of a kid
Who likes what she undid
Sad little mess
An unwise guess
Of a worm
Who seems to like
The storm
She's created
Do you still care now?
My final bow
My final trick
To get so sick
Well now you have it
My new habit
Of breaking bones
I want to own
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Hopeless child
Lost in the wild
Coming here
To explain tears
A distant fight
A muffled light
Shining now
Just to reveal the cloud
She's created.
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than
A feather
A tether
Bad weather
No other!

Oh my gosh… It almost knocked the wind out of me…

Here's one I did just now XD

Can it be more lonely
Than this?
There is nothing around me, not
Even another life form.
What am I in all this? An
Insignificant girl.
But I blink, and then
I'm surrounded by blooming
Colors that surround me.
The darkness is replaced with the light
And it's beauty
Overwhelms me.
The cold has become warm and it is
To good to truly exist.
But yet it does
And I no longer feel
Alone.

(So this one's a little personal so it might not make sense)

Bad Weather

It's all in your head
Dreaming in bed
For hopeless things
For present kings
If I had just tried
Swallowed my pride
Took off the blind
Someone to find
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Lying freak
Tongue-in-cheek
Hater who
Doesn't know what to do
An empty soul
A hungry ghoul
Who won't
Eat because of the front
She's created
Won't you stay alive
Take the dive
Bones, heart shatter
Doesn't matter
You're a missing brick
A tockless tick
They should be glad
Why are they sad?
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Smoking wreck
Unsigned check
Of a kid
Who likes what she undid
Sad little mess
An unwise guess
Of a worm
Who seems to like
The storm
She's created
Do you still care now?
My final bow
My final trick
To get so sick
Well now you have it
My new habit
Of breaking bones
I want to own
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than a
Hopeless child
Lost in the wild
Coming here
To explain tears
A distant fight
A muffled light
Shining now
Just to reveal the cloud
She's created.
I'm sorry father
You know your daughter
I'm sorry mother
I am no other
Than
A feather
A tether
Bad weather
No other!

I can relate to that. It's touching. Good job!

Here's one I did just now XD

Can it be more lonely
Than this?
There is nothing around me, not
Even another life form.
What am I in all this? An
Insignificant girl.
But I blink, and then
I'm surrounded by blooming
Colors that surround me.
The darkness is replaced with the light
And it's beauty
Overwhelms me.
The cold has become warm and it is
To good to truly exist.
But yet it does
And I no longer feel
Alone.

It's pretty! It creates an image in my head and that's good!

sometimes I wonder what it's like
to lie in the silent dark
and listen

sometimes I wonder what it's like
to lie in the silent dark
and listen

A haiku! That's original! Y'know sometimes the most touching words are simple.

sometimes I wonder what it's like
to lie in the silent dark
and listen

A haiku! That's original! Y'know sometimes the most touching words are simple.

It's actually not a haiku because the syllables go 8, 7, 3 lol
But thank you! <3

Just a little something I wrote because looking at the moon is one of my favourite things to do so yeah…..

The moon

She waits patiently for the sun to tire.

When he retires to his chambers,

taking his bright light and scorching rays with him,

is when she tends to the needs of her children.

She cradles them in her arms,

she sings them tranquil lullabies.

Though her gentle halo brings with it little heat,

her smile I warmer than any beam the sun could force.

humble as she is, she is gorgeous.

She perches daintily in the dark

the clouds illuminating as they pass below her,

her loyal servants.

Her power is wisdom, her beauty is stillness,

her pain is silence, her purpose is kindness,

her children are our brothers and sisters,

she is the embodiment of what we can never truly be

She understands the sun isn't perfect and that she isn't either.

He may be arrogant but he is bright,

She may be caring but she is distant,

he may be loud but he is thoughtful,

She may fair but she is timid.

She is happy to sit back and observe,

while her partner dictates the thinker,she encourages the dreamers,

She encourages them to venture outside of the boxes that the sun classifies them into.

She smiles a wide glowing smile over the sleeping earth.

She doesn't wail when dusk rolls around,

as she has faith that the earth will keep spinning,

and we will gaze upon her mysterious figure with awe once again.

That’s so good!

@Tiani I love it! The moon and stars hold a place in my heart! I love to gaze at them too.

Everyone's are so good what the heck?

Thank you all for the positive feedback :) xx

alright kiddos here's a poem called "guilt"

i’m not what
you think i am.
your promises are so well-intentioned,
but they make me want to cry.
please, don’t tell me i’m going to heaven.
i’m not.
the ‘me’ that you see
(the girl who’s good and sweet and faithful
and exactly what you want)
isn’t real.
would you still love me
if you knew what i really am?
or would you cast me aside?
or, worse, would you try to fix
the parts of me
that aren’t even broken?

gotta love being agnostic in a super christian family amirite lads??? haha i'm totally fine (also pls don't misinterpret this as me hating religion, i 100% respect and admire it)

That's really good. I could tell you related to it. <3