forum made soemthing spooky. but is does suck so..........

Started June 09, 2021 by @writers_goddamn_block group

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Do what you will. Critique i guess, just know this is something I wrote in an hour and I don't intend to re-visit it. ever.
aces, i suppose..

[ps, cw fer gore n stuff]

That was definitely spooky
Discomforting
but in an interesting way

Interesting premise (like was this an extraterrestrial it supernatural being bound to human form, or a human with major depersonalization) and you have an instinct for when to mention details and when to keep vague.

Could use a dash more plot development in my opinion, but, as you wrote something and your handle is currently Writers GD Block, then I say take the win. You wrote a thing! Hurrah for thing!