forum Can someone look over my new OC?
Started by @KawaiiCuteness003
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@KawaiiCuteness003

I just made this baby for a book, and I just need a second opinion on him

"So, because you think you're bigger and stronger than me you can scare me into submission? Funny."
Full Name: Styrm
Nicknames/Aliases: Styrm, Rain, Cloud
Age: 26
Gender: Male
Pronouns: He/him
Sexual Orientation: Gay
Species: Imp (3/4 elf, 1/4 demon)
Rank: Wanderer
"I've been alone my entire life. I finally have a family. Please don't take them away from me"
Height: 7'0
Appearance:⁠𝘐𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘦𝘴
Defining Features: His horns, his pointed ears, his fangs
Scars: He has scars all over his body, but he wears them proudly, always showing them off.
Tattoos: Multiple tattoos that show places that he's been before
"I think that if I had to do it all again, I wouldn't change a thing. Yes, I've been hurt. But it led me to you."
Personality: More than half the time he wears a mask. He acts confident and cocky, and like he knows that he can get everything that he wants with just a pout. But he's just a sweet and caring bean, who will do anything for the people around him. He works hard to make sure that his family is taken care of, and he will kill anyone who threatens those that he loves the most. Just don't let him know you know. He'll probably get angry and pout in a corner somewhere.
Hobbies: Reading, Cooking, and writing
Habits: Biting his bottom lip, shaking with extra energy, and sleeping in a tiny ball.
Likes: Writing, the rain, flowers, the quiet
Dislikes: Loud places, Hot sun, Wolves (the actual animal)
"I think it would be best for everyone if I left. I'm making it dangerous."
~Survival Info~
Skills: He's skilled with knives and a sword, and with patching up wounds.
Equipment: A sword someone who raised him forged for him.
Experience: Unknown
Weapons: Unknown
"Under the surface, there is no purpose."
Injuries: He has a limp in his right leg, but he tries to hide it as much as possible.
Disorders: ADHD, Anxiety, Depression, OCD, BAD PTSD
Diseases: None
Medical: None
"I wish you wouldn't have done that"
Backstory: When he was born, both of his parents abandoned him. He was found by a golem, who took him in until he was old enough to fend for himself. He forever the golems for taking care of him, but he decided to explore the world. He never found his parents, but he is welcome in both the demon realm and the realm of moon elves since he is a descendent of both.
Trivia
He doesn't understand many social cues, which makes it hard for him to understand some things
He works hard to prove himself to everyone he stays with and makes sure to prove his worth no matter where he is.
If he stays out in the sun for too long, he gets sick and is stuck in a bed for days until he can heal
He wants to settle down with someone but is afraid no one would ever love him.
He can't eat meat, due to the elven side of his DNA