@glowingwithpride
These are the three main characters for my current story, there are three more but I haven't created their profiles yet.
For context all three of them have magical deities that saved their lives in the back of their heads constantly talking about stuff so when I mention Rose, Luna, or Scarlet those are the deities, here's the whole pitch for the story.
"There are three powerful beings, young by their standards, and ancient by ours, their mother/guardian has implored them to explore the universe to learn and grow
They leave together having become familiar to each other’s presence and decide to travel together on a world called earth
They spend many years there together, observing and growing and playing together, and yet one day without warning they are tragically separated. Whatever separated them also hurt them, badly, badly enough that they must find bodies to inhabit long enough for them to heal. They don’t have much time, but they still are careful with their decisions, not wishing to bring harm to any human they might choose.
One of them finds a young girl trapped in a burning building, one finds a similarly young girl about to drown in the middle of the ocean, and the final entity finds a small child lost in the forest, about to starve to death.
They ask permission of course, and the humans agree readily, they spend the next few years together, still searching for one another."
I just need quick basic feedback on them but if you have the time to do anything in depth I'd really appreciate it, thanks!
