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Just want some thoughts/review on my story summary, not too sure if it's good, too much, or mediocre. but just some thoughts. ;_; Sorry if too long. First time putting things out here to be looked at (Gentle pls, being young)
-Beware spoilers for the overall plot, if you somehow end up coming across the final product one day. OwO. Most detail is hidden.
(Fantasy/Sci-fi/Adventure/Post-apocalypse)
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Introduction
MC is a bubbly, cute, giving, smart and good nature child who is the son of leader parents. MC developed that slowly because seen ppl being treated unfairly (and also that he's richer than them) so its ingrain in him. Anyways his parent(s) are sick and dying unfortunately from a war before and want the MC to train and be a savior from outside treats even giving an (item). MC grows with the constant demand (Both good and bad) of his people, parents and the parts of the world trying his best to guard/lead.
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Most of the antagonists have a vendetta, greedy or straight up pessimists (all with deep unique or tragic motives in each of them) Life around is like a survival game to the top to get something (and literally a determining factor if the world stays or not) MC is mostly clueless about why, as he strives to do the right thing and be moral. MC shifts away from his parents a bit from traditions. Anyways the MC plays a tug of war on getting people on his side (some succeed) from antagonists and gets a little arrogant/cocky overtime. One of the antagonists pushed the MC too far into turning him desperate, confuse/shocked (with some close one going away) and well….villainous.
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Rising action??? :v
Now the MC is a bad guy pushing is his savior complex and ideal out of control (He still has some of his morals inside like the innocent), he's fighting other bad guys even creating new ones without knowing. the days of a true hero is gone, just villains fighting on who's the top some worse than others as the world crashes.
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MC seems to be losing but a couple of other Characters saved him(They have a specific, long reason to do so to even explain) MC goes on a term with them, as they all have the same goals to fight the antagonist. MC is much calmer now focusing on the plan and (A bit of seeing the big picture for a tiny bit). But later the MC and other characters' relationships and trust are quite rocky though as they going around stopping too much from happening.
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The MC starts to seriously question his parents' legitimacy and confront them (he see they were foolish yet scared) but the more he learns the truth things begin to feel uglier and disturbing not only with his family but part of the world itself. MC and a couple other goes into a rage.
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Now it's the most depressing and slowest part of the story just not too much action. MC feels like giving up with no hope, maybe living far away for awhile reflecting. the other characters struggle with their own issues and trama too, some not addressing it. Sooner or later they all process it/make up for the disasters and pain they've done and pushed through and MC guilt/regret what he deserves and redemption. It's individualistic and very down to earth journey, MC learns to separate himself from his occupation. Not everyone ends up forgiving/liking the MC or anyone anymore.
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Rising action P.2
Most the Antagonists are either dead, withdrawn back or redeemed, Now MC has a stable team able to work together to heal and fight this one Antagonist (that's been talked about since the early histories of the world that now returned). (MC is somewhat doubtful/mistake at times but confident/good enough.)
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Let's call this antagonist P, P wants the MC to join her and bc she knows she’s strong/overpowered enough to need to be killed by an (Item) (the one his parent gave above which is the big bad of the story) would end up with the world annihilated as that would kill both P and trapping the MC bringing the Big bad free. At least with her intuition.
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MC doesn't trust P and sees the past of him in her, is disgusted and wants to let go of as P tries to further manipulate him (and anyone else as possible) into her agenda. She an altruistic, influential but has nihilistic tendencies and feels as though the MC would not listen. Unlike most of the villains. P is modest that doesn't even care about dying too much, strictly believes, whatever happens, happens. She criticizes, saying all just lost people needing to be found.
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Climax
Before MC comes up with a to defeat. He recalls his life slowly, he begins to feel sad. MC confronts P (they fought but not just with their hands alone) and he “Join her” yet defeats her at the same time. He gave a genuine tender smile, and P was calm/confused/sad/tearful/angry not redeemed but.. accepting still. A sacrifice would be made of the MC, P, and (item/big bad).
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Both MC and P vision of a better world and not letting the Big bad free from the (item) is completed, But P still defeated as she can longer stay to be apart of the world yet she has her rest.
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Resolution
MC’s power from his body spreads, making a new peaceful world after the dying old one. A new young child character looks up to the MC’s world sunset, breaths and…
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Let the air set free promising this one would be better, and that’s how the saga ends. yep (other characters are too here also, just too much detail on this here)
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(Note this isn't the timeline)
(Also I need help to know if my would MC hated for actions not the character itself and if he's an anti-hero? ;-;)
(I kinda had an idea that end is beginning and being is end hidden meaning also somewhat philosophical with some symbolism in the story to fit pieces.)
(Also, is my story too dark kinda?…seem more than a plan out to be, it happens when I write spontaneously, maybe that's my style.)
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