forum Help me...if you want lol
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@remarkab.le

Hey! I'm writing a book and so far have written one whole novella(?) in 3rd person. Then I decided that I hate 3rd person so I'm rewriting it in first person and making it longer. I would love it if someone wouldn't mind reading through the first chapter to see if it's any good/on the right track. I have seven chapters rewritten so far…so if you do like it and want to keep helping, that'd be great! It's just a first draft though, so I don't mind the harsh comments. After all, there is no such thing as a wrong opinion unless the opinion is dishonest!
Let me know!

@Aizawa-Sensei group

Hi there.
What genre is the novella? What sort of content does it contain? And, lastly, what would you "rate" it? (I.e., PG, PG-13, R, etc)
I may be interested in taking a peek at your first chapter for you! :)
–T.R.

@remarkab.le

Hi! Thank you!
Um…I don't know what it would be specified as. I'm just going to tell you Fiction. The first chapter is just really a intro to the main character and a basic intro to what is happening in her world.
It's probably PG/PG-13. The first chapter is probably PG
How do I share it with you?

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Hi! Thank you!
Um…I don't know what it would be specified as. I'm just going to tell you Fiction. The first chapter is just really a intro to the main character and a basic intro to what is happening in her world.
It's probably PG/PG-13. The first chapter is probably PG
How do I share it with you?

Open Docs link, make a public doc on Notebook and share that.

@Aizawa-Sensei group

Hi! Thank you!
Um…I don't know what it would be specified as. I'm just going to tell you Fiction. The first chapter is just really a intro to the main character and a basic intro to what is happening in her world.
It's probably PG/PG-13. The first chapter is probably PG
How do I share it with you?

Open Docs link, make a public doc on Notebook and share that.

^^ What he said.