forum Grimm's Heroes (Fantasy Role Play OPEN)

Started May 25, 2018 by @StarkSpangledMayflower_Mad_Elder

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//update on the characters - I think Maddie is the only one who’s been near completely reworked, so there’s that :/

So I've mentioned this before, but Maddie is already a character in a book I'm writing. That is why I had all of the wonderland rules that I kept bringing up along with the fate speech. Soo…um… I don't want to be mean or selfish, but I would prefer that you don't use Maddie as base for another character.

I am sorry, especially since you have put work into reworking her already, but she is my character so maybe if you sent me the details about your version of Maddie and maybe I can ok them or veto them. Would that be alright?

Oh, yeah, of course! She has a page on my profile, just let me open it up to public and then I can send the link to you

if yall want, we can reboot this? but with a completly different plot?

Yeah, that would be great. I would love to reboot this again.

YEs

Why not.

//hELLS YEA

Let’s discuss a plot in here then I’ll make a new one ok?

I'm up for another try at this

Sounds good

So what should we plan out as the plot? I’d like to keep the parents kidnaping and the ending the same if that’s alright?

(Wait.

We had an ending???)

There was a planed ending thing where we fought one of the bothers Grimm

There was a planed ending thing where we fought one of the bothers Grimm

(Oh that. .-.)

//I mean, probably parents missing and we know where we’re headed so we don’t have to plot hill the entire thing?

//okay, well let’s figure out a villain first

So my original idea for the reboot was to have the brothers Grimm as omnipotent beings, with all power over the universe, and their goal is to create the perfect story in the universe. In this process they create a being called the Grimm, which overpowers them immensely leaving them to become mere mortals, the Grimm then begins to follow the Brothers original goal, creating the perfect story.

That sounds v interesting. :O

Intriguing, I don't really have much to offer other than when I think about it. What lead the other incarnations to die was that most of us did not have goal really to work towards so we just progressively became more chaotic the further we went and eventually derailed the story to the point of no return. Yes we had a big over arching goal find our parents, but we might need more of a mile stone layout to keep the characters (and us) focused. I'm not sure if the helps at all or if I'm compliantly out of line.

So what we need is a skeleton to build around?
hey we’re Frankenstein now, building a body :D

//it’s s p o o p y time

Do we still want to try rebooting this? Because might be able to put together a rough skeleton that might work. At lest for the beginning.

So this is what I've got feel free to add things.

The party- but this time Maddie is not throwing it. The group is there to get information from a seer about their missing parents. at a certain point things go side ways. May be someone or multiple people gets spotted by an old enemy/enemies.

The house/ hideout- can be anyones home or a hidden place in wonderland/ or the enchanted forest. This is a place that they can return to after finding clues before setting out on the next part of the mystery.

The dark forest- this will be a bit more battle/ sneaking centric block of quest wile that charters try to make their way to the world tree. That the seer pointed the characters to saying that the knowledge they seek can be found their.

//I like it! What knowledge would they find at the tree? If we’re going with the Grimm brother stories, is this where they discover the legend behind their world’s creation?