forum I'll critique your characters!

Started August 28, 2018 by @purpleconverse

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Eden Wells Hit me.

Can you critique my character please? I worked super hard~

Hi can you critique my character please https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/512342#gallery_panel

Alright, be brutally honest with me about these two characters. Do your worst, I dare you!
Aswinn Caradoc: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/643619#
Meria Oswell: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/641880#

Hi can you take a look at my charater Jamie??