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(wat okay)
The bed shifts above Elise, and she crawls out from under it, daring a peek. Havenwood's eyes have fluttered open. She holds his gaze.
(wat okay)
The bed shifts above Elise, and she crawls out from under it, daring a peek. Havenwood's eyes have fluttered open. She holds his gaze.
Havenwood stretched with a faint groan and slowly sat up, his bones asking him, "What's cracklakin?"
"You were out for…I don't even know how long." Elise rested her head on the edge of the bed. "Apollo came along and got Panacae, and they helped." Her eyes were wide and doeish.
(By the way can Elise look like this https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/immortalconquest/images/0/09/Card_110454.png/revision/latest?cb=20171016034633)
(Sure but I presume with more fitting clothes?)
Havenwood looked at her. "Really?" He rubbed his face. "How did we get here… Hey… where's Conscience?"
(Yeah, and less of a hairdo)
"Like I said, Panacae gave me some stuff that made her go away. We're in your cabin. Apollo came - thank god - and carried you here. If he hadn't been wandering along…" Elise sighed.
(Yee. Looks neat.)
Havenwood laid back down with a sigh. "Gods… you don't know how long it's been?"
"I was bored so I tried counting time but I couldn't think." She laid her forehead on the edge of the bed. "You scared me really, really, really bad."
Havenwood beckoned her. "Come hereeeeee…"
"What?" She asked, looking up.
(what if their traits got so intense they appeared in physical form as like the kwamis from miraculous??? I already sent links)
(I dunno I don't really like that subplot. Inhale I was thinking we could focus on like, the link of the stars and Elise then the War?)
"Come heeeererrrrrrre." Havenwood beckoned her again.
(sure but it would be cool to have Conscience and all of that floatin around behind em)
Elise swung herself onto the bed so that she was sitting criss-cross by Havenwood's shoulder. "What?"
Havenwood raised his arms. "Come here."
(Yeah it would be cool. Could I pick another design for Perfection, though?)
(Yeah. Here: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/dDMg-dvRC1s/maxresdefault.jpg those are all the new kwamis and
https://i.ytimg.com/vi/sQAfMXQv3-Y/maxresdefault.jpg those are the originals)
"Oh. You want that." Elise giggled and leaned down to kiss him gently.
(if there's any other design tell me what animal its based off of and I can probably find someone who's made a kwami for that lol)
(Maybe not something from ML? I found this that I like: https://pre00.deviantart.net/9f1c/th/pre/i/2015/089/3/2/sleepy_chiyuki_keychains__for_sale__by_aumi_ty-d8npvkj.png. Maybe this would fit her better.)
Havenwood wrapped his arms around her in a hug. "Yeah. That."
(idn bou you but I think that's a little unnatural…it would at least have to be small to the size of a palm. I just think animal themed ones are better, but whatever you think.)
"I thought you were going to die. Please never, ever do that again."
(I don't really like the ML themed thing. Maybe I'll find an animal like thing, but I always go for human-like.)
Havenwood grunted. "The damn cliff was in the way."
(okay. that's fine, just as long as it's small. But can Conscience be a ML? It's fine if it isn't.)
"I know, but still…" Elise trailed off. "Everyone says I look like the goddess of stars. Do I?"
(Yeah, it's okay, because it fit her. But the one that you chose, in my opinion, didn't really fit Perfection.)
Havenwood studied her face. "Yeah, you kinda do."
(Ah, I see. And none of the ones in the links I sent you do either?)
"They all said she died in the war wayyyy back. And now here I am, her later twin. Is that weird to you?"
(eh not really)
Havenwood shrugged and wrapped his arms around her. "That is kinda weird."
(literally you can think of any animal and they have a kwami for it)
"Do you have any ideas why?"
(they'll work it out together i thinks)
(uuughhhh I'll probably just look up a chibi for an animal I choose)
"No, not really. She reincarnated a while back, Athena said, but no one knows how or where."
(lol)
"Reincarnated? How long ago?"
"Dunno, maybe a couple decades." Havenwood shrugged.
"How many? Havenwood, I'm…" Elise looked up to count the years. "Twenty five."
Havenwood blinked at her. "Yeah, actually, I'd say about twenty-six or so years."
"And I'm her twin." Elise blinked back. "That's really weird."
"Well, maybe her reincarnate. Not her twin."
"I'm her…reincarnate? As in, I am the goddess of the stars?" Elise's eyes went wide and she nearly fell off the bed. "Woah."
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