forum Mind Readers, Demons, and Gods, Oh My! (Closed//Stalkers Enabled)
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Zackary crossed his arms sassily. Then come on! I can't tell M to wake up because-
"What the hell are you two talking about out here?" M's irritable head had poked out of his room and was glaring at… them both.

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Yeah. Zackary smirked and stuck his tongue out at M.
"Don't think I can't see you, Zackary." M glared at him. "And North, what are you doing up so early?"

@basil_

"Can't sleep. Also he," She pointed at Zackary, "Is being really annoying. I can see why you don't like him."

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Zackary huffed. Says the one who sent me away and comes back for me.
"So that's where you went. I was curious and rather concerned." M looked at North.

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Zackary sighed and disappeared with a pop after growling, Gladly.

@basil_

North scowled and went to her room. The place where Zackary was in her head turned dark. (wasn't she gonna meet oliver?)

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(yes but then she sent Zackary away again. Zackary's a stubborn asshole.)

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(I don't think you should've expected me to change his character because I had something planned. Bad writers do that. I'm not a bad writer, as you know… now. Bad writing technique is changing a character's personality so what they're planning happens faster. GOOD writers use the character's personality and for example… send them away and add variety to the story!)

@basil_

(so basically what you're saying is im a bad writer (which is true) but I didn't expect you to change him btw. I just don't know what you want me to do)

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(No, I'm just saying that whoever (not including you. I didn't know you did that) does that has bad technique. It's fixable. Plus, I may be able to work Oliver in. Just… let's run the cycle again, okay? I didn't mean to hurt you, I was just pointing out… why I did that. So hb she goes to see him again, doesn't find him and instead finds Oliver.)

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(Wait what were you confused about? My explanation or why I sent Zack away again? I'm not procrastinating I'm genuinely curious.)

Deleted user

(SAME! okay, so would you like to time skip or somethin?)

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(well until North gets lonely in her own head again, i suppose. ^~^ orrrrr when Xanthe comes back, which is a much longer time period, then may I assume, North wants to be a little less lonely in her mind.)

@basil_

(oki i'll do whatever. you decide if Xanthe is back or not.)
North stayed in her room most of the day, barely eating or sleeping. Trying to figure out why she was so lonely without Zackary.

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(eh not yet)

There was a knock on the door. "North?" Pax's voice asked. "M wants to talk to you."

@basil_

She glanced up at the door, then returned her gaze to the ground. "What is it." Her voice came out low and tired.

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"Are you going to talk to him? Cuz if you don't he'll come up here."

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"Alright…" Pax went downstairs and passed on the news. M himself soon after had opened the door without permission and walked in, looking annoyed but holding a plate of food.