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Started February 07, 2018 by @remarkab.le

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ahhhh I can't access wattpad from the school chromebook

ah im sorry

it's okay lol it's not your fault
also do you want to read the backstory for the most psychotic character I've ever created?

sure

Do elaborate Jensen

WARNING: THIS INVOLVES A LOT OF DEATH AND CAN BE VERY UPSETTING/TRIGGERING! She grew up in Dresden, Germany, with a small family. When she was 8, a large fire was set in a museum that she was visiting with her family. Only Pandora and her mother escaped, her father and two younger sisters got trapped and died. Wanting a fresh start, Pandora's mother moved them to the United States. Pandora never knew how to deal with the grief and trauma of the fire, and nobody she knew ever offered any help. This is part of what caused various mental disorders to develop. Ever friend she made eventually got on her nerves, and she end up snapping at them and losing the friend. Things didn't turn to murder until she was around 18, when she had her heart broken by a boy named Julian. Her sadness turned to uncontrollable rage. Not just at Julian, but at every friend in school who had ever wronged her. Over the course of a few months she came up with an elaborate plan to kill every student that has upset her. On a Friday she brought a gun to school with the intent of killing 25 people. 12 people were shot, and 7 of those people died. Before the police arrived, she ran, and started a new life with a different identity in California.

Woah

Her name is Pandora btw just in case you couldn't tell

She's the villain of my book "Kiss Me Goodbye With A Bullet"

That's great Jensy!

Do you think the backstory is good? Is it believeable?

It's believable. The backstory is great.

Thank you. I'm trying to make a good, believable villain that readers hate but have some sort of sympathy for

Interesting. Add more extreme details, and you'll have one heck of a story…
I like it, but add it where Pandora is constantly doubting herself, trying to convince herself of everything. (Think of Gollum… 2 personalities, but one finally wins.)

Oooh that would be pretty interesting. Like a huge inner conflict where she has the urge to hurt the people who hurt her, but she's keeping herself in control until Julian breaks her heart and she snaps?

yeah

She isn't the main character though…

Exactly. Instead of the good, like with Gollum, make it the bad that finally wins. Boom. Darkest story, with an even darker twist.

That's what makes a story so great. Make it the person that's not front and center. Make it the one that no one believes in. Make it the one that no one would think that they would ever do a thing like that.

Yeah. The main character is Julian, and as their relationship starts to get dark and twisted, he keeps telling himself that she would never do something like that. Eventually he gets too scared and ends up leaving her, and for a while she seems perfectly normal and okay, until Julian starts openly flirting with a guy (that's what breaks Pandora's heart)

Boom. There is a perfect story.

Ahh yay now maybe I can actually pull it off lol

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lmao
btw I'm currently editing a short story I wrote about my darkest irrational fear and I'm actually kinda proud of it lol

Nice fam!

I'm afraid of the idea of infinity lol. It's kinda weird but it can actually give me panic attacks

Same.

okay now I'm about to have a panic attack this was a terrible idea

go calm down its ok

it wasn't okay lol. My fear of infinity mixed with overall life stress seriously fucked me up