forum ill critique your characters

Started June 22, 2018 by Amstance

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@amstance
Human One is named this because it is a literal translation of their "title" in their native language! They are the first one to be sent to observe humans and pass among them, which is why they are called Human One.

Do mine, please!

Otis:Otis Hartford
Abram:Abram Hartford
Annika:Nicole Genevieve Layton

hey can you do mine im new to writing characters and need help

Could you give it a go?

Heya, i just dropped by to ask if you could have a look at my boy:

Please do read the Species category, it explains some of the details
Thank you 030