forum Boxed in {Cyberpunk Dystopia RP} [CLOSED]

Started June 29, 2018 by Deleted user

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Name:
Age:
Gender:
Looks:
Attire: Nothing too flashy. This is cyberpunk based
Personality: MBTI friendly
Talents: DON'T make them all combat related
Hobbies:
Favorite Weapon: Singular
Worst Fear:
One Random Fact:
Other Sexuality, Hogwarts House, Glasses or not

Name: Lucinda Fay (Lucky)
Age: 23
Gender: female
Looks: https://i.pinimg.com/originals/e3/15/7b/e3157be80b86f7200524ca5953df8021.jpgAttire: https://img.etsystatic.com/il/cb1d49/1495642149/il_340x270.1495642149_ewpj.jpg?version=1
Personality: INFP-T but still sassy
Talents: Hacking, Art, cooking, Singing
Hobbies: cooking, archery, Writing, plying piano
Favorite Weapon: An electric gun
Worst Fear: hurting the ones she loves
One Random Fact: she has a cat named Ash that acts like a dog
Other : Bisexual, no glasses, Slytherin/gryffindor

(K buddy She's good

but

1. Your looks are a little lacking. Try and fill that in more.

2. Her weapon is really OP

3. It says she's good at Hacking? And Hand-to-hand? and Archery? That's a little OP to me. Pick one of the fighting skills and keep the hacking, or keeping both fighting skills and drop hacking.)

Name: Pheobe James
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Looks: light brown hair, golden brown eyes, quite small, pale skin covered with freckles, has a lot of cuts on her hands
Attire: top under an open jacket, cargo pants with a thigh bag
Personality: ISFJ, supportive, hard-working, take things too personally
Talents: good aim, climbing, running, knitting
Hobbies: knitting, drawing and writing poetry (though she's not too good at either of these)
Favourite Weapon: Sniper
Worst Fear: Failure
One Random Fact: can't stand carrot cake, to the point where she gags when she smells it
Other: Homosexual, Ravenclaw

Name: Artemis Palizen
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Looks: Black hair in a braid, hazel eyes, tan skin, 5'11, japanese ancestry
Attire: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/474285404488468964/
Personality: ENFJ-A (I think), leans toward ambivert though, friendly, energetic, cautious, a realist
Talents: Being stealthy, climbing, a fairly decent marksman, dealing with kids
Hobbies: Climbing, startling people (ex. jumping out and shouting 'BOO'), soccer, doodling (Not the best at it)
Favorite Weapon: her pistol (Is it like a blaster? Since we're in sci-fi cyberpunk world)
Worst Fear: Dying alone and helpless.
One Random Fact: Has vitiligo
Other: Straight, no glasses

(i feel like ahving Four talents isn't fair, and i cant really envision your girl lol)

(No they're all coherent with each other and they aren't all combat related)

Name: Beatrix Bailey
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Looks: She has long dirty blonde hair, emerald eyes, pale skin and she is also slim, but has an athletic body build. Her hair is usually in a messy bun.
Attire: Black leather jacket, grey tank-top, white jeans, black combat boots.
Personality: I think INTP You could call her the crazy inventor whose willing to take risks and is very loyal. She is also outgoing, but she gets annoyed if you get a fact wrong and she can be sarcastic.
Talents: Hacking, problem solving, Hide and Go Seek. (She's good at hiding.)
Hobbies: Puzzle solving, video games, tinkering with technology, going for walks, training, climbing.
Favorite Weapon: A mechanical dagger
Worst Fear: Rejection
One Random Fact: She hates all green things.
Other: Straight, Ravenclaw, it varies with glasses and contacts.

(K matey she's nice!

I just have a few concrens

1. Don't make her act eDgY please I've had trouble with that before

2. You didn't fill in the weapon slot (tho if she doesn't use one that's fine)

3. Her age is too low

Name: Beatrix Bailey
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Looks: She has long dirty blonde hair, emerald eyes, pale skin and she is also slim, but has an athletic body build. Her hair is usually in a messy bun.
Attire: Black leather jacket, grey tank-top, white jeans, black combat boots.
Personality: I think INTP You could call her the crazy inventor whose willing to take risks and is very loyal. She is also outgoing, but she gets annoyed if you get a fact wrong and she can be sarcastic.
Talents: Hacking, problem solving, Hide and Go Seek. (She's good at hiding.)
Hobbies: Puzzle solving, video games, tinkering with technology, going for walks, training, climbing.
Favorite Weapon: A mechanical Dagger
Worst Fear: Rejection
One Random Fact: She hates all green things.
Other: Straight, Ravenclaw, it varies with glasses and contacts.

( Is this better? I edited the personality a bit.)