She quietly huffed. "Interesting. But it's also a really good stress reliever." She peered over Artemis's shoulder and her heart stopped. The bite marks were unmistakable. "So he did do it." She whispered, stomach churning. She was going to be sick.
(Imma just go hide. Goes to a dark corner and cries EVERYONE'S BEING MEAN CAUSE THEY KNOW MORE ABOUT THIS STUFF THAN ME. I'M TRYING HERE I REALLY AM.)
(Why? Just curious.)
(Iâm actually looking into going into the FBI. After high school and college of course)
(Imma just go hide. Goes to a dark corner and cries EVERYONE'S BEING MEAN CAUSE THEY KNOW MORE ABOUT THIS STUFF THAN ME. I'M TRYING HERE I REALLY AM.)
(rubs back. You are fine honey)
(Cool!)
(Curls up into an awkward, sad raisin I'm just young and stupid don't judge me too harshly. I just wanna be a nerd about Sherlock goddamnit.)
(That's fine. But some people actually know what they're doing. If you have any questions you should ask them. That way you become a better writer! That and we're all young and stupid and our minds are filled with stupid facts.)
(ButâŚhuman interactionâŚand social anxietyâŚkill me.)
(Loooooooool. Human interaction is stupid. Use the internet then.)
(That's what I'm doing. That's why I'm here. Because the real world sucks.)
(Yes it does. Please don't make me go backâŚ.)
(Reality is disgusting. That's why we invented the Internet.)
(Lol)
(What happened to the story?)
(I think Rye left⌠And Camie isn't here⌠So yeahâŚ)
(It went off the rails when I started getting confronted and then I turned into an awkward sad raisin.)
(I wasnât judging you. I was letting it go)
(I was trying to helpâŚ..)
(Imma just go hide. Goes to a dark corner and cries EVERYONE'S BEING MEAN CAUSE THEY KNOW MORE ABOUT THIS STUFF THAN ME. I'M TRYING HERE I REALLY AM.)
(rubs back. You are fine honey)
( itâs alright and itâs not the we know more about Iâve just been researching it for a while since itâs a career I would be interested in if Art never works out for me)
Ryan sent Belle a text. âHey do you know when you are going to be back? I was thinking about going somewhere I donât want to be gone when you come.â he sat back on the couch and waited for a reply.
She quietly huffed. "Interesting. But it's also a really good stress reliever." She peered over Artemis's shoulder and her heart stopped. The bite marks were unmistakable. "So he did do it." She whispered, stomach churning. She was going to be sick.
âOkay I get that but this girls been hurt enough,â Artemis said as she turned to find Belle looking sick,âAnd you need to go sit down and drink some water.â
(I know, I know but I felt kinda bad that everyone was saying facts, talking about how tv glammed it up, griping about how it was a rip off when I was actually really excited to write the scene when it started. I felt like me trying my best when I'm not even sure how to write a scene like this and wanted to try something new wasn't good enough.)
(It went off the rails when I started getting confronted and then I turned into an awkward sad raisin.)
(I wasnât trying to make you feel awkward so sorry about that but if you want to be a better writer, you should do Research on things. Thatâs what I do.)
(Unless you are majorly wrong. I wasnât going to correct you, you were doing fine)
(I know, I know but I felt kinda bad that everyone was saying facts, talking about how tv glammed it up, griping about how it was a rip off when I was actually really excited to write the scene when it started. I felt like me trying my best when I'm not even sure how to write a scene like this and wanted to try something new wasn't good enough.)
(Sorry I didnât mean to take that excitement away but it was a little weird to me? Cause I donât think Sherlockâs persona completely suits how you ha e built Belles persona. If that makes sense. And itâs not that it wasnât good I am sorry I wasnât trying to make you feel bad, honest to god.)
(I just wanted to get a feel for it, that's all. I knew it wasn't going to be any good and was way too similar but I wanted to see how I could write it. What I could do. I know I'll have to do more research to make it better but it's my first time okay? LET ME BE DUMB AND MAKE DUMB MISTAKES I'LL FIX IT LATER AS I GET BETTER AT IT.)
(It's fine! But next time you might want to do some more research before starting a scene like that. I normally research a bunch of stuff before writing scenes like this, or if I get it wrong, I fix it and move on. But you do you!)
Ryan sent Belle a text. âHey do you know when you are going to be back? I was thinking about going somewhere I donât want to be gone when you come.â he sat back on the couch and waited for a reply.
(AnywaysâŚ)
Belle heard her phone chime. She pulled it out to see a text from Ryan. Her stomach churned harder and she gagged. 'Not sure. Where did you plan on going?'
'Not really sure⌠Maybe Maggiano's.' He just needed something to do. Anything really.