forum Fantasy, a fight against an unfair hierarchy (Open if you want to restart it(?))

Started June 18, 2018 by Deleted user

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/the summary of pg 4 is complete, I do believe/

Eira summoned some shadows to form somewhat the outline of the camp, “There. It’s shielded against humans but not against magic users so you’ll be able to see it.”

Galadriel looks at Nora. "Let us go then."

(Let’s just say Eira had winnowed the non-active peeps, goodnight! See ya tomorrow!)
“Ready Bronze?” She asked.

"Ooo, so I get Miss Eira all to myself? I'm already flushed," Bronze tried, and failed, to hold in his smirk. He held out a hand, mentally preparing himself for the twist in reality and the assault of foreign emotions.

Eira rolled her eyes, “Is this gonna become a regular thing?” She purred.

"Yes, why wouldn't it be, Eira darrrrling?" Bronze replied with a grin. Maybe it wouldn't be so bad this time.

She smirked, “Thanks for letting me know now.” She grabbed his hand, pulled him closer and winnowed, blackness folding all around them.

He gripped her hand so tightly, his other hand finding her shoulder, as he felt as if his brain would explode. He didn't even know the difference between his and her emotions. Bronze didn't want to try to figure it out as he cursed his magic abilities. And then they were out on solid ground. He couldn't seem to find his feet and he nearly toppled over.

"Oh. The flirters arrived."

Eira gabbed his hand before he could fall on the stone behind them and pulled him back to his feet, “See? That wasn’t as bad as the first time now was it? And there is nothing wrong with a bit of flirting.”

/my device is about to die. I'll see you all tomorrow :) >^..^</

/aha, I found a charger, nvm/

Bronze looked down at Eira's beautiful violet eyes and instantly felt ashamed he hadn't told her and apologized for reading her emotions. He told an unsteady step back and withdrew "…Sorry," He murmured.

/oh, shoot, I have to get up early tomorrow. I guess I do have to go :( see you next time/

(See ya tomorrow!)
Eira was confused about why he was apologising and swore Bronze could read the concern in her eyes as she looked into his beautiful face, “Welcome to my home.” She said quietly.

Olivia flew down next to Eira and looked around.

Nora turned to Galadriel. “I can fly you there as long as you give me directions.”

"I don't need you to fly me. I'm an elemental elf. I just the air currents to fly."

/Hey Miraculous, I was just thinking about this and I dunno… I kinda feel like your character is a bit powerful with flying, fire powers, earth powers, etc, etc. You can still have super cool earth powers since that's her specialty, but maybe could you tone her other powers down a bit? Maybe make it hard for Galadriel to fly or just let her change the wind direction with her air powers and not fly at all?/

Nora turned to Galadriel. “I can fly you there as long as you give me directions.”

"I don't need you to fly me. I'm an elemental elf. I just the air currents to fly."

/Hey Miraculous, I was just thinking about this and I dunno… I kinda feel like your character is a bit powerful with flying, fire powers, earth powers, etc, etc. You can still have super cool earth powers since that's her specialty, but maybe could you tone her other powers down a bit? Maybe make it hard for Galadriel to fly or just let her change the wind direction with her air powers and not fly at all?/

(yeah I was gonna have it that she can only use the air currents if they are actually their. If she can't feel them, she can't use them)

/do you mean like if there's wind, she can use it to fly? I still feel like that’s a little op…/

/Oh, hi :)/

/How r u :)/

/I'm doing good, exhausted from waking up early this morning, but good. How bout you?/

/Same, trying to survive school/

/I’m ready (also this is just an idea but maybe Bronze and Eira could have a relationship in the future?. Maybe it’s just an idea)/

/I so love that idea! I think they're cute together/

/Do you wanna do a rp right now with just them? (Until someone else shows up)/