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Darren stumbled back but regained composure as he tackled her, he was a football player after all. He was on top of her as he punched her in the face repeatedly.
Darren stumbled back but regained composure as he tackled her, he was a football player after all. He was on top of her as he punched her in the face repeatedly.
Lillian's mother shrieked as she called for help. No one made any movements to help her. Lillian looked away and curled up into a ball.
Darren didnāt stop, he was angry and out of control. Lillianās mom had blood running down her face.
Lillian's mother passed out. Lillian slowly stood up and walked to Darren, "D-Darren?"
Darren kept going, punching her frantically.
(I just see Darren furiously pinching Lillian's mother's cheeks.)
Lillian put a hand on his shoulder. She said again, "D-Darren?"
punching*
is it alright to join?
(Yeah)
Darren flinched, āSHE DESERVES THIS!ā He yelled.
Lillian let out a small whimper, like she had been kicked. She backed away from Darren. His rage was too like hers. It scared her.
He rolled off Lillianās mom and laid on the floor, his fist covered in blood.
Lillian was still a ways away from him. She said quietly, "A-Are y-you d-done?"
He huffed out a breath and stood to go by Lillian.
(I gtg.)
Lillian moved slightly away from Darren. She was still scared.
(Ookay. See you later.)
No one could tell if his episode was done, but he reached a hand out and cupped Lillianās face leaving blood on her cheek. āIām done,ā he whispered.
Name: Phoenix Rose Snyder
Age: 16
Appearance: long Chestnut hair, Golden brown eyes, short/ thin, lightly tanned. glasses.
Cliche: Musician
Clothing: casual skirt, riding boot, and black long-sleeved polo
Personality: Reserved/ alert/ defensive/ polite
She's cold and reserved around new people but bold around those she already knows. She plays the violin and piano.
Background(Optional): unknown
Other: nerdy. likes to read and write/ horseback riding
(Nice character)
@Typhoon1912 I'm new on here so how does this work?
(Do you mind if I explain later? I have to go eat.)
yepā¦
(Okay so Iām on my phone rn so it might take a second)
(So we have our quarterback, Darren, who just found out he has brain cancer(sometimes he gets really angry for no reason. Otherwise heās nice). He got the male lead in the musical and is dating Lillian who has the female lead and has an abusive mother that is going to jail soon because Darren called social services to save Lillianā¦)
(Then there is Lloyd. He is an angelā¦ā¦ literally. He has a little angel brother whoās like 5ish named Nathaniel. Their parents just died.)
(Itās a lot of angstā¦)
wowā¦
(Yeah)
so do you have to wait till the other person who left comes back to continue the story?
(Yeah. Sheāll be back)
)achoo)
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