Hey guys some of you already read this but if you haven't, could you please check out chapter one of my book and give me your honest opinion? If you don't like it, go ahead and tell me, I'm not gonna have my feelings hurt lol
https://www.wattpad.com/559843867-senseless-chapter-one
hi
omigod jense im half way through it and i already love it
also i looove all the characters they're awesome
That's really good. The introduction to the characters are seamless and natural. The word choice is really elegant and the story gets to the point really quickly.
It's great!
I think I've already read bits of it right Salt?
HELLO EVERYONE! I AM CURRENTLY EXPERIENCING A HEAT WAVE!
UGH HEAT
RN IT'S LIKE A RAINFOREST OVER HERE
you think it's a rainforest over there? it just rained for 2 days straight over here.
There has been no rain here, all the water died.
…"all the water died" <– what
IT evaperted.
WAT? I've been in snow, for like months now… I no longer know what it is to be warm… Plus the sun is up for 24 hours things is really messing with my sleep schedule… I bought black out curtains, and they barely work… Gonna have to go get more… My favorite time of year is 24 hours of darkness. Now that's fun. Plus, it stills snows. Great. Can't escape the snow.
Come over to the NorthEast Coast girl. I promise it will be like Texas.
I'm glad you like the story guys! Now please be honest, would you read the next chapter?
YES! I WOULD!! CROSS MY <3 AND HOPE TO DIE!
AHHH! That makes me so happy! I've been working on the second chapter since last night and it should be posted by Friday! (a new character will be introduced too)
yeah im working on making a new Wattpad account so I can follow you, my old one is ruined. The Wattpad system you have is great, gets you motivated and a deadline really helps, i may do that too in the future.
what happened with your old one?
i fixed it. Uh i wanted to be a Animal Jam youtuber and i made my wattpad account with that old username, i fix it though and now im gonna follow you.
OMG I LOVED ANIMAL JAM! I USE TO BE SOOO ADDICTED!
lmao thanks. My account is soooo old. I finally revived it though, unfollowed like 300 abandoned accounts, and deleted all my cringey stuff
Yes, sighs i played it for a loong time
then i got rare and it lost its appeal, then i got hacked
then i started hacking other people
then i quit
im a horrible person
I got hacked too, but my dens were so awesome, I was proud of them.
Yeah, mine too. i was PurpleViolet1804 horrible user, right?
Do you know someone by Enchanted FrozenStar?
lol no thats an animals name, right?
pulls up animal jam
I haven't been on In SOOO long so hold up
gah! It won't let me access from my tablet and I don't have the app.