forum I PROLLY SHOULDN'T, BUT THIS IS A SCI-FI RP YEAH!!!! (CLOSED) (#LARSTORIA)

Started May 23, 2018 by Deleted user

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Lars ran down the dock with the small crate tucked under his arm. "Last one!" He shouted, glancing back.

“Alright!” Victoria said, grabbing a shiny bolt from a small pile and flicking it into the air. “Let’s go!” She caught the bolt and walked after Lars.

Neku jogged after him.

He clambered up the ramp and tossed the small box in a corner. "Close the door!"

“Got it!” Victoria grabbed the handle and hefted the heavy door shut once everyone was inside.

Lars slid into the pilot's chair and started pushing buttons. "GET READY FOR LIFT OFF!" He cackled.

Neku rushed into the cockpit and started up the engine.

"Odin!" Lars called over his shoulder. "Do we have everything?"

Odin ran quickly through the mental checklist. He nodded in the direction of Lars, giving him a thumbs up.

Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"

(hmmm…..idk I guess? Depends on if you intended him to be part of the crew…)

(Her, and yeah she would be in the crew.)

(Then no. No inventor)

(I meant she's a computer programmer. And a freelance journalist.)

(I'd have to see her bio)

(I could show it to you soon, but I'm on and off)

(Okay I have some concerns

1. I really don't want alcohol involved
2. Her looks are kind of Mary Sue-ish
3. We don't need a computer specialist

Just some things I noted)

Lars nodded in return and grabbed the wheel eagerly. "Good to go then Ms. Vick?"

“Perfect-o!” Victoria called from the loading bay. “Wheels up in 5!” (Is that ok?)

(Okay I have some concerns

1. I really don't want alcohol involved
2. Her looks are kind of Mary Sue-ish
3. We don't need a computer specialist

Just some things I noted)

Right, I can redo it.

(Yeah that's fine)
Lars peered out the front. No signs of pursuit. "Anytime now Vick!"

“Alright! We’re in the air!”

Lars giggled and jerked the wheel up. The ship jolted and slowly rose.