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@Serenity88 group

HELP I KINDA WANT MY CHARACTERS TO KISS BUT IM NOT SURE IF ITS THE RIGHT TIME AND I DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE KISS CAUSE IVE NEVER KISSED
HELP

If this is not the biggest gosh darn mood lol

well She is sick and can barely speak, His heart is torn to pieces from watching her suffer and this seems like a good moment to have them smooch…
nah, ill get them close to smooching then the younger brother of Him to walk in.

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Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibited

@Serenity88 group

Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibited

she will remember at a really random time. but they never actually kiss, they just get close. I just finished writing that part, the doc is up on this page. pls review!
I never wrote anything like this cause im so worried to get it wrong or that my parents will find it

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Would she remember kissing or does the poison erase the effects?
Also is she ever completely lucid during this? It's considered kind of wrong when someone kisses someone else who is drunk/high/otherwise has their inhibitions affected when they are sober/uninhibited

she will remember at a really random time. but they never actually kiss, they just get close. I just finished writing that part, the doc is up on this page. pls review!
I never wrote anything like this cause im so worried to get it wrong or that my parents will find it

Alr cool!
I'll read it when I can :D I'm excited

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Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampage

@Serenity88 group

Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampage

omg
I am mad with Author Power all of the sudden💥
im glad you like it!! you just gave me a huuuuge confidence boost, friend

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Man whay the hell ☹️ what did Jasmine do to deserve that
Also her friends' dedication is so sweet, if anything bad happens to them I'll go on a rampage

omg
I am mad with Author Power all of the sudden💥
im glad you like it!! you just gave me a huuuuge confidence boost, friend

glad i could be of service! :)

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so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?

what I've gleaned from being here is that it's a place to talk about writing generally and share feedback and writing :)

@EldritchHorror-Davadio health_and_safety emoji_events

ok so would you say its plagiarism if you have a story and you based the story off a game and took a characters design and name but changed it up a bit?

if you try to pretend its original, yes. As long as you're willing to admit the origins of the story, character, and name, then no, it's a fanfic, like a million other great things :)

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

ok so would you say its plagiarism if you have a story and you based the story off a game and took a characters design and name but changed it up a bit?

if you try to pretend its original, yes. As long as you're willing to admit the origins of the story, character, and name, then no, it's a fanfic, like a million other great things :)

thanks! i based my story of of FNAF

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

so im curious can we like share our story on here and yall give tips or feedback..?

This works too! You can certainly do this if you want :)

also if I PM you the story will you give me your feedback and tips

@im-with-stoopid pets

Struggling to properly describe sounds in my writing-
Onomatopoeias and stuff, I know, but full-on songs are the problem points.
Music is decently important to my worldbuilding, so I can get joy avoid it for so long-

@IcarusFightsTheSun book

Struggling to properly describe sounds in my writing-
Onomatopoeias and stuff, I know, but full-on songs are the problem points.
Music is decently important to my worldbuilding, so I can get joy avoid it for so long-

if i may, in 'book of a thousand days' (a great read, totally recommend) the main character sings on separate notable occasions and 'the mucker songs' are something notable in story and worldbuilding, you could check it out.

but the way i'd do it would be:
"the melody had a jaunty note about it. up and down the song went, he sang so loudly everyone was forced to listen. the sound was more like one you'd hear in a bar full of drunken sailors rather than a cold, harsh night like this. but it did it's job and people began joining in and laughing."
or
"the melancholy sound was so sad it could make a statue cry. her song carried over the distance, the depressing highs and sudden low would make one think there was a funeral. apart from teary tune it was beautiful."

i hope this may help :)

@thecasual_hooman drive_eta

("she quietly hummed her favorite melody as she settled in. a 'la dee da' here, and a "hum hu-hum' there she quickly fell fast asleep.")
(these are kinda fun to write lol)

interesting vearry intresting

@IcarusFightsTheSun book

("she quietly hummed her favorite melody as she settled in. a 'la dee da' here, and a "hum hu-hum' there she quickly fell fast asleep.")
(these are kinda fun to write lol)

interesting vearry intresting

hello, yes that's me /j