forum The LGBTQ+ Community Chat :) Part 2!

Started September 25, 2020 by @Moxie group

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Like, not to get all preachy but… Christopher Columbus and all the others were like, historically bad dudes.

Christopher Columbus was an asshole on god

It's gonna be a long road, and a very
very fooking
slow burn
as it should be lol
Trust me, she deserves it!
Oh nuuuuuuuu this is going to be horrible for them then lol

This all sounds like it’s going to be very very painful….so yes hyped but also depressed for it lol

WOAH PAGE 102

Yo Max!!

wHoA. YaNkEe WiTh No BriM

The weather fit her mood Gloomy She couldn't believe her Sister kill her Mother THERE Mother out of jealousy ¨why?, why would she do this my wedding was two days ago everything seemed fine then..why?!" she wept ¨Luna dear I know you're still in shock but you need to prepare for your Coronation¨ said Creator Alexis Coronation…I never expected it to happen like this my mum was supposed to be here, she was supposed to hand me the crown when she was ready to step down not get murdered¨ said Luna ¨ I know sweetie I know I was expecting her to be here too never in a million years did I expect my best friend to get murdered by her own daughter…its time for you to rise luna your now the official leader of the elementals you will use your powers for the greater good and bring humanity back to balance ¨said creator Alexis ¨thank you mommy¨said luna ¨anything for my daughter-in-law¨

Right, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.

RIght, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.

I don't write that often I'm a beginner

Same.

I see…

Right, right. I must say, within 6 seconds of reading this I already spotted at least five problems.

^^^

im TrYiNg

Never said you weren't.

The weather fit her mood

Add a period.

Gloomy

Add another period.

She couldn't believe her Sister kill her Mother

Sister should not be capitalized, and neither should mother. Kill should be turned to killed.

THERE Mother out of jealousy

It's their mother, not there. Also, mother should not be capitalized. And there should be a period after jealousy.

And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.

yo why the fuck are you posting that here

Yes, this too. There's a nifty Sharing & Critiques section you could try.

And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.

Good luck, stay safe.

And now I have to leave. Gotta prepare some stuff for school tomorrow.

Good luck, stay safe.

Thank you :)

yo why the fuck are you posting that here

Yes, this too. There's a nifty Sharing & Critiques section you could try.

thx im still learning about notebooks btw

I'm gonna go colonize the bermuda triangle anyone wanna come with

y e s

I wish to join

hi

Hello.

what

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hello

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Page 103

Ah yes

Is there any good reason we're celebrating every new page?

I'm gonna go colonize the bermuda triangle anyone wanna come with

y e s

I wish to join

Anywhere you go, I go!!