forum Elementals Chapter 4: Celestial Tides (OPEN)
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(XD felt that sorry for llate relpy reading gay stuff. just to help with some romances because thats hiro's sexuality XD)

@Tired-but-passionate

(Ok. So first, like @Story_Creator said, magic isn’t an element, so you might want to change your wording. Now, I’m not entirely sure what op imagined for ‘magic’ to mean in this context, but I imagine, since we already have space and time as elements, you wouldn’t be able to teleport/apparate at all. At least, not at will, with no consequences. You could take inspiration from Harry Potter, and have him need certain ingredients to accomplish a magical feat. Maybe something like blood, or hair, whether from him, someone else, or an animal. Kali seems to be the only one he’s been close to, so if anything, he should’ve teleported to her)

@Tired-but-passionate

(I’m just following the logic that since Hiro got close to Kali, he may found a hair strand from her or smth and used it to teleport to her. Sorry I didn’t clarify. You might want to describe him using the hair strand)

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( okay like i said im noobs of noobs and only on book 3 of harry potter xd)

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Ignis tried his best to keep the water back, taking more power then he realized. Ignis quickly gabbed Kali, before the spell broke. He closed his eyes tight and teleported the two out of the temple. Ignis felt incredibly weak and could barely move. His breath short and his muscles strained.

"ignis!" She made sure to catch him incase they might fall to the ground. If they weren't already on the ground she would lay him gently laid his head on her lap.She closed her eyes and breathed steading her breathe. She was trying to heal him, like she did with Amara but then again it was different back then. She would have less strong powers. She concentrated harder, and nothing would work. why isn't it working?! Why now do my powers decide to leave me?! She felt a tugging, but it was as if her flow of powers had been blocked. calm down, focus. She continued to focus, and eventually got the smallest bits of darkness, she focused it soley on helping ignis. At least making sure he could breathe normally now.

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hiro came running out the temple , he looked at the few people there " and nobody tells the mage that where at a temple…"

@Tired-but-passionate

"your about to go deaf for a minute, I'm gonna try and open the door." he mad sure they couldn't hear anything, before stepping back from the door, using his sound ability to produce shattering screa,s at the door. the only thing that happened dough was him being blasted back by darkness from the door. He cursed, his ability wasn't on them anymore so they could hear things again.
"Why wont this door open?" he grumbled. He couldnt even hear the water rushing in anymore. neither could alister or noel.

The siblings scrambled out of the way, at first wary of the door being destroyed, but they managed to avoid only a wave of darkness instead. Alister covered his ball of light with his hands, hoping it would stay intact, but he could see it getting dimmer.
“Well, we’re not children of Darkness, are we?” Noel said, her shoulders tensed.

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Evan didn't hear them, and just continued to glare at the door. He wasn't aware that noel had said anything. do I still have them muted? He turned around and saw her lips move but didn't hear anything. It still took him a while to respond,
"I guess not." He wanted to turn back around to face the door but if he had to lip read then he wouldn't be able to read there lips, already knowing they didn't know ASL.
"I think it turned off my powers somehow." He let it slip out, speaking his thoughts out loud.

@Tired-but-passionate

“Oh shoot,” Noel turned to her brother. “That’s why he took so long to answer.”
“Is that why the light is dimming?” He asked, focused on the ball in his hands. He was thinking that maybe the door was diminishing their powers too.
“Honestly? It’s probably not just that. The sun is definitely setting by now, and the darkness in here isn’t helping things. Also, you’ve only made those things… twice before?”
“Three times, including the one that was put out while we were singing.” It made him think of how Evan had pulled him into a dance, causing him to blush slightly. Unfortunately, it also made him lose focus, causing the ball of light to go very dim.
Noel, still able to see Evan’s figure a few feet away, went over to him and grabbed his hand, pulling him back to their spot near the wall.

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with it getting dimmer he had to squint to read their lips and even then it was hard to see and find an accurate response to what they were saying. He sighed, he tried to be optimistic but he couldn't help but worry. He let Noel lead him over to alister and thems spot, sitting down next to alister.
"I hope Kali and Ignis are okay…." He looked down frowning.

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(Magic is like using elements but not as easy. Certain skills like enhanced senses and teleporting can be used but not as powerful. Like fire. You can cast a range of fire magic but Ignis can manipulate and control all fire. You throw a fireball and Ignis can light you up with a look. While magic covers almost every element, it's not nearly as easy to use or control. Magic is very unpredictable and spontaneous.)

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Ignis's aura faded as he wasn't able to awake. The stone levitated above Ignis's chest and became unable to be moved. Ignis lied on the grassy plain and he too was unable to move. The stone spewed a red aura like a waterfall on and around Ignis. Whatever this water was, was scarier than Ignis had ever faced. What corrupted magic could do such a thing? Kali, Evan, Alister, Noel…watch out…

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(Elementals are also able to use magic but are only strong with magic using their element. If Kali used a fireball, it would be weak. A ball of solidified darkness would be much more effective with her. Just an example.)