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Crystalpaw came out of what he had of the stance and stomped angrily on the ground. "I just can't get it! I just can't!"
Crystalpaw came out of what he had of the stance and stomped angrily on the ground. "I just can't get it! I just can't!"
Copperflame flicked his tail, standing up he padded over towards Crystalpaw, "Cystalpaw, your thinking to much about getting it right, relax and imagine that…" he paused looking over at a fallen piece of heather in the corner, "imagine that the heather is a mouse, its nibbling on some seeds and you need to feed your clan… do a hunter's crouch and crawl over towards it."
don't mind some new character, Dragongirl made him up and im just rolling w/ it lol))
(Cool cool. )
Crystalpaw tried to sneak up on the heather and was doing rather well until one of his front paws hooked on the other and he fell over again.
Copperflame bounded over towards Crystalpaw, "hey! that was great! next time try and put your paws further apart and when you feel wobbly, dig your claws into the ground and pause," Copperflame sighed, "if that doesn't work we can try some battle training, yeah?"
"Yeah. Yes please." Crystalpaw muttered, a bit embarrassed. Despite being one of the oldest apprentices, he was behind the others and he hated it. He tried as hard as he could but nothing really worked.
Copperflame nodded, "Hey! its alright!" smirking Copperflame leaned toward Crystalpaw. "y'know, I was just like you once, my mentor was Berryclaw and he said something that'll stick with me, never give up, young Copperpaw. cliche? yes, but does did it help me? yes, yes it did." flicking his tail, he looked over at Owlheart, "alright, Crystalpaw, Owlheart with be your battle partner and i'll watch and make sure neither of you hurt eachother."
Owlheart knew that Copperflame was right, as much as she hated to admit it, but she also felt like he was trying to make her look like she was incapable of training an apprentice. She shot Copperflame a glare, but nodded and got into her fighting stance
Crystalpaw stayed standing normally and tried not to smirk. He was better at fighting as long as there was no structure, no specific moves.
Copperflame backed up, walked past Owlheart and brushing his tail along her flank as he whispered, "I will allow this once but, go as hard as you would like on Crystalpaw. I don't want him to think that him to think that we both think of him as weak." padding back into the shade he let out a yowl, "go ahead, let the battle training begin."
Owlheart tensed at Copperflame's words. Cyrstalpaw is not weak. She brushed it off. She'd worry about it later. She smirked back at Crystalpaw, and lunged at him, claws sheathed.
Crystalpaw dodged under her and quickly spun around to face her. He let a growl resonate in his throat, excited to fight an opponent that wasn't his mentor.
(I made every one or how I see them, hope you like https://www.notebook.ai/documents/108645)
(Im just going to bump this because I still love it-)
(I made every one or how I see them, hope you like https://www.notebook.ai/documents/108645)
(Im just going to bump this because I still love it-)
:)
i mean, i love it too XD))
ima just be Owlheart for a bit until Dragongirl come back lol))
(Hi)
o h ))
whomp, well hey! qwq))
Owlheart quickly spun around. She lunged forward, but landed slammed her paws down before Crystalpaw had the chance to move. She let out a satisfied purr as she pinned him to the ground. She backed away and let him get to his paws, making sure to stay out of reach.
(Lol :P)
Crystalpaw let out a yelp when she crashed into him. He got up hurriedly and shook himself off.
(sorry for short answers, I'm not great with fighting scenes)
(Gtg for a bit. I'll be back.)
(sorry for short answers, I'm not great with fighting scenes)
thats okay! we no judgy here lol))
(Gtg for a bit. I'll be back.)
cya!))
Copperflame let out a quiet sigh, "Crystalpaw! always be on high alert when battling, im sure Featherbreeze has at least taught you that!" the tom mewed at Crystalpaw, the apprentice looked over at Copperflame for a breif moment before nodding and facing Owlheart.
Crystalpaw leapt forward this time, determined to impress Copperflame. Owlheart dodged sideways and pushed her paws onto his side. He was knocked across the clearing and rolled a bit when he hit the ground. He scrambled up, panting already.
Copperflame smirked, "Crystalpaw, when she runs at you, run at her and go from there!"
(Im back)
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