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@Pickles group

So I decided to play words with friends (by myself because I have no friends) and I'm actually not losing by a lot. Anymore. Most of my points are coming from the special spots on the board

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I. am. so. bored.

and my hundred fifty dollar headphones are FAILING ME

what is this world

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

i have one pair of earbuds.
one.
it stopped working in one ear, and seems to get a bit quieter every time i plug it back in
…it's gonna be a long few months

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Fingers

why do you bleed

the guitar strings are puny and you are strong

Deleted user

No, I got the beef

it's basically a baritone guitar

Deleted user

Where in America was the farm?

I'd try to add some more to the personality. I understand what you're doing, but I feel like including what he's actually like could help.

How does he feel about Rowan now that she's gone? Resentment for not telling him anything? Sorrow for the times they won't spend together? Etc.

How does his family feel about the way he's changed since Rowan died?

I see you put a lot into this. I like him. Great job!

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FACTS @Dark_Depresso I'LL YELL AT YOU HERE AND IN PMS

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That's our fucking baby, depresso.
Get over here and explain yourself.

@ElderGod-kirky group

Where in America was the farm?

Kept it vague 'cause technically he was for a rp and the setting wasn't explicitly clear, mostly due to it being a reservation-like area in the far, far future. (Aliens overtaking Earth 'nd whatnot). Might just do a random central state.

I'd try to add some more to the personality. I understand what you're doing, but I feel like including what he's actually like could help.

I feel like his personality is more… shown?… in the second half of everything, outside of the personality section. I have a hard time describing characters' personalities and rely mostly on actions, habits, conversations, and whatnot to show their personality more than tell it.

How does he feel about Rowan now that she's gone? Resentment for not telling him anything? Sorrow for the times they won't spend together? Etc.

The second question was answered further below.
And… feeling isn't something he has anymore? At least, not until he gets help. He shoves everything away and locks it tight. Anything that even touches on the subject of Rowan is shoved away and untouched. So, really, he feels nothing. He pretends it doesn't exist, even if it's such an impactful thing on his life. He's upset, but that's just the vague 'feeling' he has regarding Rowan, beyond his violent denial.

How does his family feel about the way he's changed since Rowan died?

His mom is reasonably heartbroken that her baby has become basically a husk, but she doesn't see the full extent of it because of how much he cares about her. Even in this state, she's too important of a person for him to shove away. He still protects her from those dreadful chores, still supports her when she's feeling down, all that jazz. She doesn't know how to help, and he's made it clear that he doesn't want any, so she's stopped trying in the hopes that he'll figure himself out soon enough.

I see you put a lot into this. I like him. Great job!

Thank you!