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@Althalosian-is-the-father book

I came very close to making a My Immortal reference in my creative writing project, but I ended up cutting it for space lol

Ooooooooooo you could have though… What were you going to do?

I was writing a short story about Della and Beck, and I was going to have this in her narration:
"My hair hadn't been its natural brown since my goth phase in middle school, when I sort of looked like a dollar store Enoby Way, complete with the plastered-on clown-white foundation and eyeliner with the wingspan of a bald eagle."

AND YOU GAVE THAT UP!?!?! WHY??????

I was running out of room and was like double what I was supposed to. I can send you what I did write though, I kinda like it.

Running? Out? Of room?? I do not know this concept. But send it though by all means.

@Moxie group

All legitimate reasons. All the people at college really only one person that really bugs me thinks I'm a loser. I don't want to have to deal with outside life here. I've built myself a place here and I don't want the balance shifted.

Exactly

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

@Gyoza I think Tasha is probably my favorite of yours.

:O

Someone loves my sarcastic, emotionally compromised, punk singing, disaster Wraith.
This makes me so damn happy

You'll have to tell me about Tasha. And also if you want to talk to me about Silas @JynSeesAGreenLight hit me up, friend.

I love him

So do I. I used to hate him but he's grown more in character and I am really wanting to give him some POV time.

I have the issue of giving everyone a bit of POV time, even if it's just one or two paragraphs. It helps to build character.

I've seen it done decently (Bridge to Neverland) but I'm not sure how I want to do it. I would like him to have a chunk of his own (maybe one chapter? Idk.), but I don't want to do the HoO deal at all.

@Moxie group

I set up a google doc so people can read my story off of that instead of notebook

other than that, no one has a clue about my writing adventures on notebook

People know I’m on some writing website all the time instead of working but most of them don’t know any specifics

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

All legitimate reasons. All the people at college really only one person that really bugs me thinks I'm a loser. I don't want to have to deal with outside life here. I've built myself a place here and I don't want the balance shifted.

Exactly

Yeah. I have issues with her because I love her but she can be so mean but I think she thinks she's alright and ugh.

@evastardust groupRRAAAARRL

@Gyoza I think Tasha is probably my favorite of yours.

:O

Someone loves my sarcastic, emotionally compromised, punk singing, disaster Wraith.
This makes me so damn happy

You'll have to tell me about Tasha. And also if you want to talk to me about Silas @JynSeesAGreenLight hit me up, friend.

I love him

So do I. I used to hate him but he's grown more in character and I am really wanting to give him some POV time.

I have the issue of giving everyone a bit of POV time, even if it's just one or two paragraphs. It helps to build character.

I've seen it done decently (Bridge to Neverland) but I'm not sure how I want to do it. I would like him to have a chunk of his own (maybe one chapter? Idk.), but I don't want to do the HoO deal at all.

Same, I want to stay away from designated chapters and go with the flow more. Della's the only character who gets a first person perspective because I wanted to try my hand at a very distinct voice for her.

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take off your hat bc it’s not fashionable enough to die over

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

Well anyway the concept alone of people not liking Dom or Moxie has officially broken my brain and I can’t-
it doesn’t make sense
what-?
how-!
I need to take a tiny sleep this is too much

Deleted user

Am I asleep?

no

should I be instead of staring at my ceiling having a deep dread in my own future and where my life is going to lead and how i’ll even end up being older than eighteen?

i mean what?

i want to be rude to my brain

just

i hate it

Deleted user

Literally nothing will happen when you turn 18.
no one treats you any different.

@Moxie group

Well anyway the concept alone of people not liking Dom or Moxie has officially broken my brain and I can’t-
it doesn’t make sense
what-?
how-!
I need to take a tiny sleep this is too much

oh I wasn’t … agreeing with that part. People that don’t matter to me don’t really care about me, but they don’t dislike me

Deleted user

Literally nothing will happen when you turn 18.
no one treats you any different.

Why are you saying this? I mean, I mostly agree. But…

Because of what I said, which isn’t exactly what I meant but thanks

Deleted user

OH whoops.
lol I gotta stop drinking and responding.

Bad Eris

Deleted user

nah it’s okay, i just wanted to be rude to myself lmao

the half-drunk Eris is completely needed right now ngl

Deleted user

Teenagers having crises about life is wild man.
It shouldnt be that way.

Yall are so worried about everything, when nothing is happening to you. No job, no taxes, no car payments, no bills– and yet yall freak out about reaching that point.

Wild.

This world has fucked up so many people, but none more than kids. It's not fair.

I will say:

It does get better.
Because like–you master it all.
all of it
it takes time and you'll mess up.
but
It all becomes second nature.
and you kick it's ass.
in your own way.

Deleted user

woah this became the chat of meta Eris advice too

thanks

it’s just scary to imagine myself there, or to try, and not be able to see anything

they expect you to have a vision or a dream or somewhere or something you want to end up as, but I just don’t see an end goal

it’s just… why am I doing it? Why can’t I see myself there?

am I not good enough? is there something I’m missing out on?

Deleted user

Because your vision isnt their vision
stop trying t see theirshit
see yours.

Dont push, just let it come to you. YOu dont needa plan. Plans get fucked the firs dayt
You just need determination to be happy and acheive the goal of one day at a time