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@Althalosian-is-the-father book

Neirym sighed loudly through his nose. He snapped his fingers and a flash of pink light surrounded the rat man, freezing him in place. “Show some respect, mouse.” He glared at him irritably. He nodded at the mirror. “Nice creatures, dear,” he said to Actinolite.

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Zach looked again and smiled… or at least he would have. No matter what he tried, he found himself paralyzed. Not an inch of him could move, not a bit of him could speak or even close his eyes. He struggled and tormented against it, but it felt impossible. He couldn't scream for help, for vocal chords seemed shut up. He was stuck in a leaning, cross armed position looking over the tablet, which he feared was too subtle to show he was frozen.

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(pfft makes sense. I'm mostly testing out my idea for my character, he's meant to be a bit more of a smooth talker, but just as punk and horrible at handling gore, also rude and nonchalant. Him being just rude here is still fun though)

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(nah all villains are rude don't worry about :D what drives Zach crazy is just normal "criminals" instead of tyrants, and also gore. He hates gore, feel free to annoy him with it)

@Althalosian-is-the-father book

(I feel exactly the same as Painted Wings about my character. I would hate/be terrified to encounter him irl but when I’m writing him when he’s not being too evil mind I can have quite a bit of fun.)

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(haha yeahhhhh it's great and awesome. Only problem I'm finding right now is that he's pretending to be in charge but he's powerless right now. Not a bad thing plot wise, but he's VERY vulnerable right now, so who knows what could happen to him?)

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(haha nah I think a bit of blood is okay, but maybe no gore. You can annoy all the villains, they are all dooshes)

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Actinolite looked rather pleased that he liked her. “Why, yes! She’s my work, and she’s the best I’ve had so far! She does have some flaws, but those kinks can be fixed.” She smiled, “Don’t worry, she’s incredibly strong, she could probably fly with you in her arms! That’s Angel, she’s the sturdiest I’ve made, and Druzy is the smartest, her form is completely solid, but she’s very small.” Actinolite zoomed in on the picture, showing a spiked purple figure that laid across one of Angel’s legs. They looked to be the size of a kitten.

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Neirym smiled, without a trace of malevolence, honestly a little impressed by the craft. “I am amazed at your skill. Is that where your power lies?” he asked with just the faintest trace of seduction in his voice.