This sounds fun and interesting!! Thing is,,,,,,i have a lot,,,,,,of shit,,,,,,4 u to read,,,,so it's okay if you don't want to do it lmao i just thought it'd be neat to see someone else analyze yaboi
(This one is the canon story, but it's still going through the first drafts, so it might be a little messy. The character I'm asking you to analyze is Jean, but you can do Anubis if you'd like! He's an interesting boi and we're not 100% on him in general)
https://www.notebook.ai/forum/roleplaying/dis-private-yo
(This one is the thread where we write AUs and/or various snippets of canon parts of their lives. I think we specified which parts are canon and which aren't, but there's literally almost 30 pages of stories in there so you're not required to read all of it lmao)
https://www.notebook.ai/forum/general-writing/funking-jeanubis
Can you do this character pls? He's one that I've been working very hard on. The document linked is actually a snippet from a google doc that I have formatted weird, (Because I like it for writing purposes) so the formatting is messed up. But the content is the same. (Honestly I wouldn't mind you doing Both Arthur, (the character I'm asking for) and any others you see in the document if you want to. Any feedback is appreciated.
https://www.notebook.ai/documents/97011
(Also let me know if you wanna read more. I need more feeedback.)
Alrighty, note that I still have a life outside of doing this, so I won't be able to get them all done this minute.
(I know, just whenever you have time)`
(Of course! Don't overwork yourself and definitely don't stress about it. :) Take your time! I've got a lot of stuff I can't find the time or energy to do as well so I totally understand haha )
(Feel free to skip mine or just not do it if its too stressful. Sometimes working on things is hard, and no one blames you for it.)
Clownface and Levi
WARNING: CONTAINS GRAPHIC SITUATIONS OF GORE AND MURDER
Jason
NOTE: A lot less grusome than the first story.
(Please read everything I have wrote if you can, and please take your time.)
I'd like to ask, how do you go about giving a character depth. Like yeah, the backstory is a part of it but how do you add more than that. Especially through speech, that's my biggest struggle right now. I'm usually very good with dialogue but lately, I've been out of it.
I'd like to ask, how do you go about giving a character depth. Like yeah, the backstory is a part of it but how do you add more than that. Especially through speech, that's my biggest struggle right now. I'm usually very good with dialogue but lately, I've been out of it.
(Tag me in another thread and I can try to help!!)
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